|Reviews for EO Challenge LIVE & LEARN|
| Dizzo chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Poor little Dean; sometimes the best lessons are the most unpleasant ones.
Beautifully done x
*rubs his little ear better*
| mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Ouch...its painful - physically and emotionally. Let's hope John wasn't this harsh too often! Best, Randee / mainegirlwrites
| Amberdreams chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Good use of the word and love the child-logic.
I'm a bit uncomfortable with John actually boxing Dean's ear though (probably because my cousin suffered a burst eardrum when his git of a father did it to him).
| MeAzrael chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Noooooooo – you're seriously trying to break my heart here, girl! What did I do to deserve this?
Okay, I absolutely loved the way you wrote this. I can see it in brilliant colors, a perfect image. So vivid, so sweet, so sad.
"He vaguely wondered whether or not someone actually removing his ear and putting it
into a box might have hurt less?"
But why does it have to be John? Sniff! I see - that's your way to tell me that I have to write about John to protect him, right? On my way - as soon as I'm done with the Brooklyn Bridge (should be named Brooklyn bitch, cause it's a bitch to write it).
| Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
"I'll box your ear." - that's a great use of WOW, hun
| Wynefred chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Ouch! Yep, that's a tough lesson to learn. Great use of the word, btw.
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Sounds like little Dean was bad but I hope John hasn't smacked him too hard. When my mama smacked us it always hurt our pride more than actual hurt.
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Oh very nice use of the challenge word!