Reviews for N of Kumo
spartan321 chapter 9 . 8/20/2014
I haven't read it all yet but from what I've read I simply adore this fic, like you any fic's where Naru is raised in a different village sing's with my soul and this is by far the best fic I've read in this particular genre.. if you could mate, would you be able to email me on my FF acc with any rec's that you have about this genre since I gather your a fan of the same kind of stuff?.Anyway, peace out and keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 33 . 8/11/2014
so far so good with the 33 chapters some made me laugh my ass off other appealed to may more violent side or touched my inner romantic the only part that hasn't been entertained is my inner Jariya but i understand the time to make it feel more natural and if you are taking a vote on how the romance will kick off my vote goes to yukito confessing then kissing naruto
Tribernator chapter 33 . 8/9/2014
Heh, I have to admit loving this story. I find it amusing how quickly and easily you made kumo super strong. First getting naruto there, then bringing in other bloodlines willingly instead of kidnapping and theft, then the forbidden scroll. Its honestly surprising to me that it hasnt made any really apparant changes yet. I mean, you would think it would have by now. Also, how long are the vessel trio going to hide their abilities with their demons? Now that they know they will be targeted, they should come clean so they can concentrate more on it without hiding.
celohei chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
surprising plot. let's see what happens next!
Guest chapter 33 . 7/13/2014
Can u get back to n of kumo
Guest chapter 25 . 7/10/2014
In my opinion I loved the search arc! It was brief but well written. I loved the fight scenes. #1 fanfiction story
yindragonkiba chapter 33 . 6/27/2014
I sooo love this story
loganhunter2 chapter 21 . 6/27/2014
For some reason I expected raisen to die too, the feels there would have been even greater good job on the fights 9 / 10
loganhunter2 chapter 18 . 6/27/2014
Alright this is a great a really great story but the sasuke hate has to simmer and yes I hate the guy with a passion but rather than openly bash him do it more subtle like. ...that's just me but other than that I have no other complaint. ...i could bring the grammar card but I have read stories with worse grammar but even better story and this falls there too so no problem..9 / 10. ...just simmer the duck hate
Belo chapter 33 . 5/27/2014
Please update soon if not a chapter than at least a status update
Guest chapter 24 . 5/20/2014
You gotta quit character bashing. Its not good for a storY. And shows the immaturity of the writer. Now this is a good story I'll admit. But it would be better without the hate. Mainly toward the Uchiha's. They're a crazy and prideful bunch and for that they deserve respect. Hell are cgaracters do. Now but im no Sasuke fan. Infact I down right hate the fucker. But as a non-writing bad writer i'll still show him the respect he deserves. And not be labeled as "Our favorite favorite asshole" You're good but youll be even better once you ignore your pregideces for certain characters for the betterment of yioure story. Not trying to hate but help. Healthy advice! Yum!
CypressIsMe chapter 33 . 5/16/2014
This is probably one of the best naruto fanfics i have ever read on this site! Its such a shame it hasnt been updated in a while... Im looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/10/2014
Naruto is too op ,it ruins the fights and it makes all the limelight go onto him,it just makes the story boring and takes away from all the other characters ,in addition to that you follow the original story to much ;you should have had a chunin exam in iwa which would allow you to do something unique with your story and itachi should have joined the akatsuki it is pinnacle to him as a character if he does the massacre so you should have just removed the uchiha massacre and let him stay in konoha or had him realise some sort of corruption and have him run away with sasuke to kumo
This story is just one of the crowd of mediocre fanfics ,it could have been better
Belo chapter 33 . 5/7/2014
Please update soon I love this story
akatsuki-espada10 chapter 33 . 5/4/2014
I love this story and can't wait for more! Update soon!
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