Reviews for EgyWhat?
Kira The Mew chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
This was a good story and I think a sequel would be nice
Nagisa00 chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
nice was funny how everyone came in and said the same thing in a matter of seconds
Nagisa00 chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
yo...this is funny
Konata 3 chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
Ok, YOU have matured. I admit that, I know that u probably did not expect this BUT, it happened :3,
SeeU (always wanted to say that :) )
Akane Mirai chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
I am such a terrible Fanfic writer. I am typing on my kindle so I couln't update my profile. It's been months now and I haven't updated this story or let anyone know... I was so busy with school (plus this is a secret) and I am just so busy. In the near future (soon) this story will be updated two chapters. I apologize for the inconstancy and inconvenience.
Kira The Mew chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
Please try to update soon, this is a really good and funny story. If you're stuck, maybe you can read the Kane Chronicles again.
Juan Pujol Garcia chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
Please continue this!
GLaDOS chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
DANG! only three chappies.
Postquam est chapter 2 . 2/13/2012
This story is interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes.

I did notice that you seem to jump around settings without really describing what happened in between, and fixing that would really make the story easier to follow.

(Example, chapter 2:

"Well, we have another one lost," said MEIKO.

"Hullo Muffin! I've been looking all over for you!" cried Sadie.)

Other than that and a few grammatical errors that you might want to look out for, the story is off to a good start :)