|Reviews for Sea Daddy|
| yaoifan124 chapter 4 . 9/14
I loved this! Ace being into a kink like spanking?! I can totally see that! I do love this! Sea daddy, nihihihi! Loved! Thank you for sharing!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
I was amused, good show!
| Yuki Artsa chapter 4 . 1/30/2015
Omfg this was so sweet, so good, I love it w
| PurpleBlueberry chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
I loved it all! Marco's a favorite, but this was...WOW.
| Fushicho92 chapter 4 . 9/16/2014
love it! :D
| LeiaGray chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I just cant believe I havent written a review for this one!
Just so you know it: I LOVE IT
Its one of those stories, I read over and over again
Also it inspired me a bit for "Triangle"-I just love how badass Marco is :)
Anyway, PLEASE write more MarcoxAce stories like that!
| ExGratia chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Oh God, is there a chance to rip Marco out of your story and give him to me? Hahaha, just joking, but seriously, he is extremely seducive in this story. I haven't read a story in which Marco was the one creating huge sexual tension for a long time. And boy, he surely did it in yours. Ace was like his prey, completely unable to resist him (and I think secretly unwilling as well). The way both were drawn closer and closer to each other was amazing, truly amazing!
I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for posting :)
| Awkward Little Boxes chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
It satisfied so many desires I didn't even know I had. Of course now I want more, but that's the way with such things I guess.
First, I learned a new word: meretricious. I love new words that mean such specific things, so thank you!
Second, your portrayal of Marco as so competent and so casual - such an unflappable badass - makes him extremely attractive. I liked his character a lot before, but I fell a little bit in love with him after this, so awesome characterization *thumbs up*. In particular, I love how Ace punches a hole in his chest, yet Marco's completely unconcerned with that and only interested in Whitebeard's required sleep; I also love the clear image of smooth skill you draw when Marco kicks Ace's knife away then shuts WB's door with the same foot. And your contrasting aspects of his personality gives him depth, gives him a level of bitterness that we know he must draw from when he's being his harsh/bad-cop disciplinarian, and gives him that aura of wisdom that allows for his soft/good-cop role.
I have to wonder too, based on the little bits of his history you've created, just how many times Marco has looked at men who've desired him, and does Ace realize how wanted he is for Marco to return that desire. Because even though he was punishing people on a ship as harsh as his former one, it's not improbable that there'd be masochists and subs great enough to be aroused by it still.
Third, your descriptions of Ace are so adorable. He comes across as a prideful, juvenile fire elemental/dragon that can't fully control himself yet, with an inflated sense of capability that gets lanced by Marco's experience. That he's miffed when he can't annoy Marco with his bad manners is hilarious.
Last, some of your lines are so memorable:
"...deeper into Marco's nest, where he devoured his prey whole." This is perfect for everything that Marco is in this story.
"He felt like he was glowing red, like an ember just waiting for the wind to give it a breath of life." This sentence. This sentence is breathtakingly lovely. You've just described perfectly what it feels like to be spanked in such a way. If I ever come across anyone who hasn't felt it, this is exactly what I'll say from now on. Really. It's beautiful.
Of all your stories, which I admit I'm a bad reader and haven't reviewed, I love this one the best. While Law is intriguing and Kidd and Killer have lots of potential, I think you've done something wonderful with Ace and Marco. Maybe I'm biased, I personally like them better.
So, thank you so much for taking the time to write this and sharing it.
| Owl Satire chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
I enjoyed reading this so much. I like to read to get myself sleepy and this was definitely perfect and heartwarming to end my night with and sleep on. (Also hot. But heartwarming/cute porn is my favorite kind.)
| Yvonne Park chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
Good story! I liked it!
| Zombietooth chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
I don't even know how often I've read this story already since you posted it, but I finally wanted to tell you how much I love it.
In fact, Sea Daddy is the reason why I started shipping Marco and Ace in the first place XD Before, I never even thought about those two together, but now I can't stop looking for fanfictions with them - ultimately returning to this story for I just can't find a better smexy story of those 2 :)
| migrained chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
This is another great story! 3
| mary d ace chapter 4 . 6/14/2013
best story i've ever read
| Ujvari chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
OMG, you nearly made me faint!
This story was simply amazing!
It just ended way too soon...
If there were 20 more chapters, I wouldnt mind :D
What I liked most was Marcos room.
I picture it were comfy and somehow like a place, separated from the rest of the world, where youre protected from everything.
No wonder Ace totally lost it!
I wish I could write like that.
| CloudMonsta chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
I absolutely adored this fic, especially seeing the dynamics of how Ace goes from rawwwwrgh WHITEBEARD'S HEAD to part of the crew (also Marco). Really really well written and paced, positively wonerful. 3