|Reviews for Gliding Fury and Magnum Shot|
| Rain Smallwaters chapter 10 . 12/7/2014
YOU'RE BACK! Greet chapter!
| LibbieLies chapter 10 . 11/26/2014
Yay Happy Kai is finally starting to warm up in the group. Looking forward to next chapter!
| MortisLunaris chapter 8 . 8/2/2013
Reminds me of my brother and I.
Kai and Lann player respectively.
Tho he always get me killed XD
| MortisLunaris chapter 9 . 7/20/2013
Planning on adding Vella anytime?
| XSilverLiningsX chapter 9 . 6/19/2013
Lann is such a derp, haha. Glad to see that he's (mostly) getting over his childish pettiness.
| Lyelentu chapter 8 . 6/17/2013
I love you. This is brilliant. HA HA!
| rushninja chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
Hahha, silly Lann and his in-game references. It's funny how Lann acts like he knows everything while in actuality he is completely clueless. Bomb chapter! :D
| someone chapter 7 . 5/4/2013
this is a fantasic story but i dont understant why the title is "gliding fury and magnum shot" but i enjoyed reading it thank you
| Sekowari chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
I just started reading your fic and I love it already! I really like how you described the camaraderie between the 4 of them, their hopes and aspirations. That last line I found hilarious, with Kai sounding like the apocalypse hahaha
| Sakor chapter 7 . 4/2/2013
I really love how you made Kai's "beloved" his sister, the thought that he had a lover doesn't sit well with me. Maybe the idea of "angst-y lost love" was too cliche, but he really appealed to me as a big bro or at least a family type of guy. I've been following this story for a while now and I have to say, your characterization is fantastic (needs some fine-tuning, but fantastic nonetheless). You didn't make Evie too bubbly and girly, and Fiona's stoic levels aren't too over the top. You made the characters all sassy and smart-assed in their own endearing way, a sassy Karok, who wouldn't want that?. I always see the team as a inseparable family even as I play the game, with the exception of Vella. I just don't know where she fits into the team, not hating on her though. In my own opinion, Lann has many unique relationships with everyone. The co-captainmenship with Fiona, the gag-reel when he's with Evie, and the bad-assery when he's with Karok, it'd be nice to see these thrown in while developing Lann and Kai's legendary bromance. Really nice concept, I do hope you continue to update :)
| under the stars tonight chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
Yay! An update :) I really enjoyed this chapter. Lann seem's to have matured with his attitude towards Kai and you can tell Kai is slowly, very very slowly warming up to them. I also like the fact that they have more in common they at first glance (they both don't have tact? i guess lol). Can't wait for the next chapter!
| LibbieLies chapter 7 . 3/21/2013
Woo update! I like how you made it his sister. I'm pretty sure a lot of us assumed it was a lover. Lann is hilarious! I loved seeing his past as well. I really hope you do write another chapter before the end of break but if not no worries. Awaiting your next chapter
| Luana Fluorite chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
Hurry up with the updates 3
| under the stars tonight chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
I'm glad to see that this is still going on :) And based on the description of this story, I look forward to what will happen next :D
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
u need to continue this story it's cool and u can't leave it hanging like this