Reviews for Lost in Translation
WinnieFawn chapter 6 . 3/8/2012
Lol I spewed my coke when Braení termed 'girls'- she's picking up some language herself! I really like her character and her seemingly sunny disposition. Kinda motherly if you ask me, a good thing given the mood of our fair Evelyn. Calithil contrasts very well and I enjoy reading the emotions and changes of the elves as you write it because it feels more natural. I usually see two stark contradictions, ether they are made of stone or they ARE stoned. It's nice to see balanced, emotive, but also uniquely different people among your elves. It's hard to figure what a 7,000 year old elf would have on on his/her mind, but it just never seemed right that they would be so very.. bland.. luckily your city is full of life! Can't wait for more :D
Lady Minuialwen chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
safa56bmc chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
i often wonder what the male elves did when they would come face to face with a full bodied woman..haha..any way i was waiting eagerly for ur u.
Glory Bee chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
Love the fun dialogue between Evelyn and her maid, cracked me up hearing an elleth chatting about "the girls" lol
WinnieFawn chapter 5 . 3/6/2012
Very Interesting, I'm hooked and hopefully it's not for another let down, it's like your in the middle of your favorite tv show and the electricity goes out. So frustrating lol!
SavannahMaethilwen chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
Love it so far :D Update more when you can!
just a girl chapter 5 . 2/25/2012

Your style of writing is amazing! I love your descriptions and dialogues.

I hope you will write more soon, because I would certainly love to read on.

In my opinion you are a very talented author.

Greetings from Germany :-)

PS: Please excuse any mistakes in my review, English is not my mothertongue.
Claire chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Gandalf's daughter? I think it's actually genius,what an interesting twist!

I'll follow you, please go on and update soon!
Claire chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Gandalf's daughter? I think it's actually genius,what an interesting twist!

I'll follow you, please go on and update soon!
Sexy Vampire Girl chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Ohh I like this. update as fast as you can please. _
Lady Minuialwen chapter 5 . 2/17/2012
safa56bmc chapter 5 . 2/17/2012
thank u for the update.i was waiting for seems she will be on a hope she can bring luck to the fellowship.
watergoddesskasey chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
lloved it!
The Hobbit Ivy chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
Although initially hesitant about the chapter title (okay, although I was physically repulsed by the chapter title) I trust you! Don't worry - the readership and reviews will come in soon! It's hard to get a story all set up and ready before it can set in motion. When in doubt, however, shamelessly beg for reviews. ;)

Looking forward to what comes next!
danastarry chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
Trust me, if I lack to review a chapter, it's because there was nothing for me to say, it was totally satisfying and I am content. xD

I'm confident this won't be a Mary sue story. But for the love of god, don't let her be perfect and miraculously be as good at bow and arrow as Legolas or as good at sword fighting as Aragorn in two freakin months xD
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