Reviews for Shards: Kick About
jboy44 chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
please update soon
Zaralann chapter 2 . 2/18/2012
Super story! Post more!
heartblackened chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
Happy birthday
speedykatze chapter 2 . 2/12/2012

i read your story today.

and i really like it.

poor jiraja when he comes to the village.

so i hope you continue soon because i like to know on what team their are.

deltawaves chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
why title this chapter moonfang?
Psudocode Samurai chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
Certainly not a bad start, though Ino/Sakura were a bit much there in my opinion, it works _

It will be interesting to see what happens with the teams, not to mention the later test _. Keep up the good work.
renegadeofficer89 chapter 2 . 2/9/2012
I'd say this is a pretty good up the good work,and hope that you can continue this.
ero-sennin56 chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
happy late birthday!hopefully a narutoxnariko pairing..not incest since technically she not his real sister and plus she knows him inside and out and will never betray him and he probably couldnt trust anyone else enough to be paired with anyone else :)
god of all chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
This chapter was nicely doing I enjoyed it alot also I was wondering if you can make this into a small harem for Naruto and have him paired with Nariko as well
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I like the idea of Naruto that has finally learned who is parents are and that now he has a sister
Purple Pallbearer chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
This is a cool story, really well writen to. There were no mistakes as far as I can tell.
commanderDJ123 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
i can see that this story will be interesting and are you going to go by the cannon story or not
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