Reviews for Pretty Girl
joayla chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Great oneshot!
jennykate chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
LoVED this o/s! It just needs to be longer! Very sweet E & B!

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KelseyBea chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Cute oneshot! A little short, but still great! Can't wait to read more from you!
What Obsession17 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Love it!
Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
excellent story.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
I loved it so sweet thank you
FrustratedLawStudent chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Great story!
allthingsHHH chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Awww, you know I love it!
keyecullen chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I completely cracked up reading this. Love that Bella is all coordinated and Edward is the one that bumbles around. Well that among other things. Love this Jasper and his, "What's the fun in that?" stuff too. And I can only imagine a bunch of dumb jocks sitting around having Edward school them in romance! LOL! Now that is a funny picture right there! LOL!

Then this?:

"No, not really. Sometimes I dream about stapling your fingers to your face,"

Yep laughed right out loud when I read that! Scared the cat too!

Anyway, funny, funny, FUNNY one shot! I enjoyed reading it!

Keye
Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I loved this. It was so sweet. It reminded me of she's all that a little bit :)
puasluoma chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
It was very nice!
kelley77 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Really sweet one shot. Kinda reminds me of that movie "Can't Hardly Wait" with a twist. Love it, great stuff! )
84gemstone chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
:) you know I love your writing, you where one of the first I started reading thanks to Joayla
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
This was fun. I like that Bella was the confident, popular one and Edward was the geeky, shy one.

Thanks for sharing!
VampLuvah chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Loved it.

Read the casting couch too. It was just wow.

Really and truly anything you write is gold.
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