Reviews for Starlight
Marian Terra chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I already reviewed one of your newer fics (I Dreamed a Dream) as an anon (Marian Terra), sorry about that but I was to lazy to log in on my iPod.
Anyway, to this story.
This was something so totally new and beautiful in a completely new way. Your writing literally gives me chills, and I love reading a story and feeling so much emotion personally. I don't know how you do it, but this writing was gorgeous. Your use of excellent verbiage should have been overused, but it wasn't. (if that makes any sense at all).
The only thing I had a little bit of difficulty with in this one was the change of perspective between Merlin and Arthur, but beyond that, it was perfect.
I really enjoy your work and rather spectacular metaphors and similes, and I am really looking forward to whatever it is you post next.
littleshyangel chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I have to say this is one of the most beautifully written stories I've read. It's filled with so much description and detail that you can imagine the scene perfectly. I've always loved the film Stardust so to see my favourite two characters being put in a similar story line is wonderful.

Merlin being described as lonely and sad made my heart ache, it's one of those things I dislike seeing in him but often happens. I have no idea what this version of Merlin has been through and I'm almost nervous to find out, especially if he's only 20. What could have happened in such a short amount of time that a man who's smile is as bright as a star now cries when looking out his window? Can't wait to see how that pans out.

How you described Arthur's feelings was spot on. You could really see how much stood out against the normality of the earth when he himself was a star. The way he sought out Merlin without consciously trying to and how he seemed to forget the pain his body was experiencing because he had seen Merlin, that made me smile. These two, no matter the situation, will always be a safety net for one another and I couldn't imagine another reason for Arthur to fall down to Earth.

I look forward to another chapter of this story to see how the scene unfolds and the boys act with one another. I'm sorry my review isn't as long and descriptive as yours always are, but I hope I've gotten across how much I love this beginning chapter and hope you carry on with another. You write so beautifully and are so talented, consider me impressed :)
Silent-Ninja x chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
*screams excitedly*


I practically screamed in excitement when this came up on my emails, I was so pleased! :)

Read the story, and just one thing to say...

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*squeals like an unattractive pig*

ohmygosh I love your writing style so much, its absolutely beautiful!

You HAVE to continue this, or I might actually die ;)

Ok, not taking up any more of your valuable writing time, but you know I love anything you write but Stardust is one of my favourite films and I would love you forever and ever if you continued this :)

BYEE! *screams and falls over in anticipation*
Secretdork chapter 1 . 2/8/2012

In a word.

The story 'stardust' is beautiful, enhanced only by merthurising it :)

You write so beautifully. You just do. It's a gift, and nobody can thanks you enough for sharing that with us :)

-SD xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P'tite-Yume chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
That's very lovely... Peaceful but sad in the same time. I would like if you write more of it :)
Corey YoungBlood chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Oooooooooh very interesting :) i'd like to see more of this.
allthingsmagical chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Can I just say...WOW.

I absolutely loved this and you have left me wanting more, reading this is like reading a sad love story, each yearning for th e other. I don't like it. I LOVE IT!

You have to continue this story as I want to know where you take it to next. I abosolutely love your stories they are like reading romance through the words of poetry.

Please post another chapter.


I have added this stpry to my favorite story list because that is where it belongs :) :)