Reviews for Just One More Kiss
prttykitty7728 chapter 16 . 3/28/2012
:D Nice chapter! I bet I know what going to happen! Lolz
Rinoax chapter 16 . 3/28/2012
Muahahahah I love the evil grumman and jis helpers LOL..x D

Anyway, i got the mental image of roy slapping asses in the range...well If it's only of Riza's is good XDD

anyway, I loved the little conversations add, showing how Rebecca is in this plans and the cute little thing between Roy and Riza. :D
TheSilverGunAlchemist chapter 15 . 3/27/2012
I say this All the time

And I'll say it a hundred more

I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. SOOOOOOOO. MUCH. BEST. STORY. EVER!

Your amazing! :) truly amazing

:)

Royai for the win!

Can't wait till the next update :)
UniversalBunny chapter 15 . 3/26/2012
Oooooo wobbling over as always
Starship Artisan chapter 15 . 3/25/2012
Hahahaha that was one awesome chapter! Awesome job, can't wait for the next one :D
Rukia's Reflection chapter 15 . 3/25/2012
Great chapter!
MRMenaMRM chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
I didn't see this chpt it was awesome!:) Hm so how much does Chris owe grumman? Haha:) update again soon!
MRMenaMRM chapter 14 . 3/24/2012
Awesome chpt! Really enjoyed it:) update soon thus couple rocks! Royai 4ever!_
ongoingAccident chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
Once again, I must commend you. You have very nearly made me cry tears of joy (and anyone who knows me will tell you that I don't cry over movies, books, etc. Never.). THEY'RE FINALLY ENGAGED! :'D It's kind of funny that both them dating and Roy proposing was pretty much a result of dogs. The dogs in love in the rain, and now Hayate. Roy is the only person that would ever happen to. XD And I love seeing Roy "fight" with Hayate over Riza. Hayate's like a jealous lover or something. XD And I love how Riza tricked Roy into thinking that they'd be... you know... fooling around at his place when she really just wanted to pack (God, I'm so immature.). XD And then, of course, the shower. In which Riza pretty much asks for Roy to try and have sex with her by inviting him in in the first place. Anyway, you did an excellent job with this chapter (though this shouldn't surprise anybody), and I really hope that you update soon! :D

Write on!

MC
Rinoax chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
*laughs* I love hayate. XDDD

Well well, this was interesting. I loved how he "proposed" and how he messed and how he tripped rushing to the bath xD

Awesome chapy lovely
purebloodprincess159 chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
LMFAO! This is such a GREAT CHAPTER!

I would just like to say Hayate is the BEST dog in the world! i wish I had a dog like him. He's the only one that can do the one thing Roy was too slow to do.

I 3 Hayate!

Anyway great chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon!
pasaisea chapter 13 . 3/24/2012
Just wondering why riza said that she wasn't exactly a virgin when he sleeps with roy. And the most important is with who do she fucks with ? it was still a mystery xD
PokemonFreak90 chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
Yay! Riza said yes!
KageNoNeko chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
Hayate is such a good dog.
KageNoNeko chapter 14 . 3/24/2012
I found a missed place ". Also, "head a scuffle" should heard instead of head in it.
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