Reviews for Slips Away
Kmpcarter chapter 12 . 4/4
Tgis is a beautiful story. I wish you had finished.
Ptool chapter 12 . 3/30
hope you continue, great story
Ozzyturn chapter 12 . 3/6
I'm enjoying this story. Please come back to it.
Robin.D chapter 12 . 3/6
I hope you are doing more on this story :,-)
GrainneSwann chapter 12 . 3/4
... why do fan fictions always stop right when they’re getting to the good bit? It’s so frustrating. Especially when they’re good ones like this.
ptool chapter 12 . 3/2
great story. hope you finish
genius swan chapter 12 . 2/21
Me encanta esta historia! Garret es simplemente encantador. Espero que actualices pronto!.
Bibis Pandora chapter 12 . 11/30/2020
historia adoravel.
xxxdivinecomedyxxx chapter 12 . 11/3/2020
I just want to to say that I'm in love with this story. I'm liking everything so far, I can't put into words.
I wish the story to receive loads of love.
Keep up the great work!
Taylor chapter 8 . 11/2/2020
I am so glad you returned to this story, and that you didn't let it sort of unfinished as it was on chapter 6, or succumbed to the fear of uploading it as you stated in chapter 7, I cannot tell you how much is turning such a bad day into a good one to me to be able to immerse myself fully into your story today, thank you for keep writing and sharing this with us, readers.
Taylor chapter 7 . 11/2/2020
Aw, I absolutely love Garrett, you writing him so, that you made it impossible not to love him, he is so fantastic. I feel so bad for him that Bella doesn't seem to reciprocate his love for him, he deserves to have his feelings reciprocated so much more so than Edward ever did in my opinion, she is going to be such a fool if she doesn't realize that soon enough.
Taylor chapter 5 . 11/2/2020
What, smutt so so soon? I hadn't seen that coming, I wasn't prepared, it's too soon! And I mean, not that protest against it, not al all believe me, I do NOT, it was all very well written, and you did justify her emotional instability so very well, so it didn't feel gratuitous at all, and that's always good.
Although, I believe this is supposed to be a short story so it makes sense I guess that things happen like this.
That being said, I love, and I mean absolutely love, your Garrett, he is what I was expecting (hoping) him to be in my mind when I started reading this story and you have no disappointed in the least, their interactions and relationship seems just so natural so organic and in no way imposed or forced, nor does it seem spontaneous even after being intimate not even a whole day upon meeting each other, it just seems so real to me, and I marvel at how did you accomplish that in such a few chapters after introducing Garrett's character in the story, so very well written and the quality of the story hasn't diminished a single bit, on the contrary it keeps getting more and more enjoyable to read, I send my appreciation for all your wonderful writing, thank you so much for writing this.
Taylor chapter 3 . 11/2/2020
Why, this is good. I never leave anon reviews anymore but I think your story merits a review for sure, I've been looking for some vampire Garrett stories out there since watching the twilight movies recently, I found his character really interesting and intriguing, and it left such a good impression on me that I wish it would have been a little more development of, well really many of the vampire witnesses gathered by the Cullens in Breaking Dawn, but particularly his character, so I was hoping to find some good pieces of good old fanfiction literature on him but to my dismay I wasn't able to find any, that is of course until I found yours, and let me tell you that your narrative since the beginning it's far more superior to any of the stories I have encountered so far, and believe me I have started reading plenty, I wish the chapters were a little bit longer thou, and that's only because I am enjoying very much the way you sre tell the story, and I am able to immerse myself in it for a moment thst it feels cut off when the chapter ends way too soon for me, but I am saying this of course from the perspective of an avid reader that wants to have more reading material and be able to continue to be "inside" the story a little longer, I am liking the way you're writing the character of Bella so far, it seems to be reasonably in character despite the story going so off canon at this point, I really do believe that upon being turned against her will and in such a cruel way by Victoria she would found solace in the thought of facing her off as her equal not caring for her own life beyond that, and although I haven't been able to connect too much with the subplot of the Cullens, specifically Jasper, searching for Bella, and have the anticipation which probably was intended for the reader to have, of them finally reuniting with her on time, after their anxious search, I still think this story has the potential to be a great one and it's overall so much better than any I have encountered before, I can tell that you have very promising writing skills that can keep a reader attached to the tale your are telling and the characters therein, there's is a couple of odd selection of words here and there thou that make me feel like maybe you're trying too hard to seem knowledgeable with your selection of words, like on that line that says something like : "She asks rethorically" that , in that moment seemed at odds to me with the rest of the narrative, but still there's nothing detracting or anything about the whole of the story which seems to be flowing rather well paced and in a way that it's very enjoyable to read, thank you for writing this, a story that it certainly stands out from the rest
celajwhitney chapter 12 . 10/4/2020
sorry i didn't comment before but i couldn't wait to see what happened next! this is a wonderful story and i have it on follow so i hope to hear from you soon. thanks so much.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/10/2020
You seriously made my day - this is one of my 3 favourite stories on this Fandom and you are finally here with a continuation 3 as usual, the chapter is awesome, can't wait for more action and the conversation between Garret and Bella for their newly reciprocated feelings.. such a great couple you created
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