Reviews for Uninvited
Stirling Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I recently started getting into xxxHolic, and I thought: "Doesn't Val have a few xxxHolic fics?" I thought you might, so I went to your profile page, and then I find this...Did you not tell me about this, or did you tell me about this and I just didn't listen? Normally I don't go looking for Jason/Bruce fiction, but since it's you and I was intrigued by the mention of Zombie Jay, I had to take a look. And whoa, this is amazing. Your take on this so so interesting, I don't even.. I'm in awe, truly in awe. I would have never even considered the thought of a coherent zombified Jason, and then you came along. This is amazing Valerie, I love the way you did this!

(Also, I did find the xxxHolic fanfiction.)
pamellka chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Oh wow, that was rather...dark? hot? disgusting? It was wonderful.
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Great line, it captures so much between those two:

"Like everything else between them, their actions start out with superfluous cruelty."

You did a good job of showing Jason's zombie side through bits and flashes here and there. The slow revelation of his zombified state builds up tension and adds to the element of "strange." I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
Dextra2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Cool
Your-Nuclear-Holocaust chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
This made me sadder then it should have, but then again anything involving Jason makes me WAY sadder then it should.

Love the description you added in to show the age on Jason's corpse too, very morbidly beautiful.

Disturbing yet marvelous in it's imagery.

Great job Huny-Bun.

-loves-
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
God damnit, Jason! Why the hell don't you stay dead? He could be the best villain out there. Good thing he became Robin, sort of. Very interesting piece. Poor Batman. What is he going to do with all these kids?
Dark Goddess Of Shadows chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
...just a little creepy :