Reviews for The Unexpected
ifonly-criedthewoodpecker chapter 3 . 3/23
I love your writing style so much! You have such an interactive way of communicating what's going on in the story, and it's so brilliant! I want to thank you for writing what you have of this story seeing as it's not only an excellent idea with a wondrous mixture of humor and plot, but because it also introduced me to your writing. Anyways, this is absolutely marvelous and I hope you don't mind me saying so!
Mai Ascot chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
STALKER! But I'm liking the story... what does that say about ME?
KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Ooooooh this looks good so far!

Admittedly, it makes me a liiiittle nervous only because I've seen "The Lovely Bones" and that kind of thing...

well I dont like children getting hurt XD;

ANYWAY, I do hope you're still going to write this story; it's nice to find a Dewey-centered MitM fic (and one that doesn't involve incest) and I look forward to reading more
AshGirl101 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Good, but I think you got the ages wrong. When Malcolm was thirteen, Dewey was seven, Reese was 14 or 15, and Francis was sixteen. He only got emancipated in season 3, so he must have been seventeen then, but that was when Malcolm was fourteen.
walkersystem chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
God, this gave me chills!