Reviews for The Heat of the Battle
gohan21 chapter 1 . 6/4
excellent story ,,,well a good beginning
Guest chapter 6 . 5/8
Fucking finish this you asshole! What a great story!
Cloud Narukami chapter 6 . 1/2
More please
Twisted DKat chapter 6 . 5/30/2014
It stops here? here? really... here?

I like it a lot. I don't know why, but you always astound me with your writing. Please do update... please.
firebolthallow1572 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Are you ever going to finish this story. I would on it if you don't want to.
firebolthallow1572 chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
You need some bedroom seines to go with these other part of the story.
Soulless Huntress chapter 6 . 5/3/2013
I love this. I like Albus' reaction. I always thought they would make a good couple, or at least Grandmother/ Grandson.
Mrs.SNMichaelis112113 chapter 6 . 4/8/2013
This is awesome! !
firebolthallow1572 chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
Why haven't you update
Guest chapter 6 . 3/8/2013
that'd be like a bad car wreck, just sheer morbid curiosity.
K.A. Le Chat chapter 6 . 10/12/2012
you should update
Kimi Lowe chapter 6 . 10/2/2012
Love the story so far.. Can't wait for more.
Refreshingly Original chapter 6 . 9/15/2012
Update? Perrrrrdddyy please!
Eryk Lestrange chapter 6 . 8/19/2012
please update! and with M-rated content!
Yue Sai chapter 6 . 7/15/2012
Oh that sneaky b*st*rd! Thanks for continuing, and drink something carbonated, it always helps me when I'm up late writing and I get tingling in any of my limbs. Good luck with the rest of the story and sorry or not reading this chapter sooner :)
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