Reviews for Chapter 1: The Audition
Batman chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
This chapter was not as good as the other two.
GrandTheftTARDIS chapter 3 . 2/25/2012
Good Job! There are a few spelling errors though...
PrincessDiMimi chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
Ohhh mannn! I see a very twisty plot coming in! This sounds really good, I can't wait till you update again! UPDATE SOON!:D
PrincessDiMimi chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
I cracked up when Lars started talking. He's got pretty nice man breasts ahaha! Great chapter! (:
PrincessDiMimi chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Great first chapter, you did a pretty great job with describing the situation! I really like your character so far, she seems pretty gnarly (:
GrandTheftTARDIS chapter 2 . 2/16/2012
This is a really good chapter! But why is it rated T?
GrandTheftTARDIS chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Good but WAY to short.