Reviews for Not A Fairy Tale
AlwaysDaniel chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
This deserves so much more.
Acero 12 chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Really, I loved this story.
I have to admit it was a bit strange at first, but I was catching on a bit.
Peter found something slimy hehe.
I love these two characters (I curse you, Slott), and I always think that there are very good chemical (possible future love partner?) In both.
Well, I hope you keep well with your stories.
mkeeg91 chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
aww! haha! that was very sweet :)
I liked that whole "giving your heart" bit.
I don't think I've ever heard of that being used before
AmazingSpidey52 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This story is great. Peter and Carol are awesome together. C'mon Marvel, make it happen.
ApolloSeven chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This is so adorable! I absolutely love Carol and Peter as a couple. They are one of my favorites as well. I read all your stories about these two. 'Want' was my favorite. You wrote these so well and I hope to see more!
sadistic lunatic chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Wow... simply... wow.

And that bears repeating!

There's so much sweetness in this that I fear for my health! What Carol gives Peter at the end was both unusual yet heart-melting.

Pete, you better keep her dear!

Peter Parker/Carol Danvers is also my favorite pairing :)

Damn, why can't Marvel hook Pete up with Carol? ! They should really make a "What if?" oneshot (that doesn't end in heartbreak) about these two!

Anyways, love this piece; it's short and endearingly sweet.

Will you be doing a White Day oneshot also, if only to see what Peter gives Carol? B