Reviews for Romance of a Family
toastergal chapter 3 . 1/24/2014
Are you contuning this story? I really like it
WwLOLwW chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
Aww so cute!plz update soon!
Queen Umbugartus chapter 3 . 3/30/2013
I like SlightlyPissed!Alfred.
NanamiToamata chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
first of all I just have to say, I loooove this story,
Gil and Matthew are such a sweet couple.
Just a few things about the german (Ye, i'm a native german therefor... ;) )

"Don't worry yourself over this, GELIEBTE. You're still as gorgeous as ever," he murmured, mouthing at Matthew's neck.
It would be GELIEBTER because Matthew is male and you used the female form. In German it's a bit more separated in terms of gender...
also for meine süße it would be mein Süßer for same reasons.
"Easy, wertvoll. Just relax; now roll onto your back. There, is that better?"
It's a bit difficult, because we don't really have this idiom in german...
I'd use Schatz instead, but its not the correct translation...

Anyway, if you'd like, I could help you with the german translations, if you like, just send me a PM

grapejuice chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
omg please continue, this story is amazing! poor matthew... i love how sweet gilbert is to him!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
i wanna know what happens next! T.T
UnifiedNations chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
Will there be more soon? :3
QueenXofXtheXDamned chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
Ahmehgosh XD this story is just too cute! I just found this randomly today and I loves it already

keep up the *awesome* story.
X.x.DemonicXXAngel.x.X chapter 3 . 5/29/2012
I love this story so much! I think I found only one typo: chased the water droplets down Matthew's legs abdomen and legs.

But that's the only imperfection I found :D Otherwise, it's absolutely perfect! Hurry and upload more chapters, please! :D
Athesia chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Good job hehehe yes "God forbid" Arthur
Progota chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
So wrong but so RIGHT AT THE SAME TIME!

southparkyaoifan chapter 2 . 5/22/2012
i wonder if the baby shale be the micro nation of NEW PRUSSIA XD so fit
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
why does everyone think taht he would leave mattie? we all know he wouldnt!
blueisme chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
Naw this story is so cute! I love gil been all liebly and protective and stuffs :3 I'm guessing your not a franada supporter by the last part? Thank you for having some sense with pairings XD quite honestly I like the FACE family theory. (not that this really matters to you but w/e XD) well done . good luck~
Athesia chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
Oh my gosh! Update this soon! It is amasing!
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