Holy crap that was awesome. Make a second chapter or a sequel. I want to know what happens next! Like max's reaction.

Thank you for this, I love it!

Great story i love it.

Great story. It was really well written. I know it's only a oneshot, but it should have multiple chapters. I would love to see what happens next

Oooh I rather like this story! It has the potential to become a whole story, not just a oneshot! I'd like you to see if you could keep going with this, really interesting to see if Max had a sibling.

I loved this. Very in character and well written. A few minor typos, but nothing overly distracting. I know this was supposed to be a oneshot, but I think it would be great if you added more chapters. I'd like to see more scenes with Bailey and Charlie, especially after the birth of the baby. How Max would handle it. Just an idea to keep in mind. Great job!