Reviews for John's Return: The Untold Story
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 3/2
Brilliant and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this.
steph chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
wow i actually thought that Sarah set him up but they were just tracking her on the phone
annika-lori chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Such a good story! Love it! :D
Marauder Neyo chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Well Author, even though I'm not much of a fan of the John/Sarah pairing, I have to admit: your story is pretty good. It shows that there are really two point-of-views to every story.
lucas chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
wow. that actually believably sounds like what could have happened. but i still want john to get together with 6 instead.
KrazedSnowflakes chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
This is good!
WonderMelon chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Later on, John kisses Six, and it was amazing.

:P
Emma chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
WOW! That's amazing! Really good, exactly how I want to interpret that scene :)
aBrokenJar chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Thank you for writing this! Your version is so much better than what happened in the book!

I was so mad at how they made Sarah look like a traitor in The Power of Six! She was my favorite! But hopefully it's resolved in the third book. John said he still loved her, so there's still hope! (:
jsmisacb chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Whoa! You've done it again and have written another amazing story!

I really hope that that is why the FBI arrived because it would be so sad if Sarah did turn him in!

And I swear if John and Sarah dont get back together in The Rise of Nine I will have a mental breakdown!