Alright this is the first hate review I'll have done online period but, this story is bullshit. I could understand the Kyuubi being able to see what's going on but being able to mess with the gaming interface is absolute bullshit.(note;I'm not complaining about Naruto getting screwed over) You could have given the interface an AI or literally anything else to have made the tutoriel harder. So yeah despite wanting to see where this goes it's just too much for me.

Awesome story. Thanks for writing it.

when i read the description of Jingle jungle person i can not think who was it but when are here pink hair little girl and bells in the hair i screenᕼOᒪY SHIT KEИPᗩᑕᕼI!... henabi is Fuck.

Half a year it said...anyway, been an amazing adventure tnx for that. And adding the complete icon wouldn't be out of placeFirst time i see Hanabi included in actual plot scenarios.

What I would give to see this story finished.

it became trash here naruto just blurted out everything to hiruzen about his reincarnation and the system

I really wish you continued this, I love it so much .

Naruto is a fucking simp, i hate this

I dont like it.

A real shame this story died. No way will there be more after this many years. It's really good.

The fact that this is abandoned is quite sad. Nevertheless, awesome story, so thanks for sharing!

Loved this story.

Even though it's quite a bit old, it's still better than most of the newer gamer stories, love lots of the ideas and the party system.

I called the Kenpachi reveal which was great.

Hope you are doing well in whatever current part of life has you enthralled.

Hanabi realy?

Oh my GOD this is good! I didn't expect much from such a strange story idea but this was amazing! The way the characters speak is realistic and the details are amazing! I am so sad that it seems to be abandoned! Great job on this story!

I didn't know what to expect from this but WOW it is awesome!