|Reviews for The Machine's Symphony|
| RabbitHash2016 chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Well, well, well! Do I smell a masterpiece coming on, or what? It'll be interesting to know how the technology/society/etc. has changed in 1000 years, if I may say so. Nice start so far, please continue! :)
| Nova Sinfonia chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Hey, this is an interesting concept. I'd like to read more. I was interested in the characters and startled to read that Alex's brother died, but it provides a good set-up. One thing, though - I think setting it in the next millennium is too far into the future (who knows what will happen then?) but that's my only criticism.
| Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Wow, this is certainly an original set up! I like how you lay out the basic premise and describe things with great originality.
Have you ever read a book called TORTILLA FLAT by John Steinbeck? It is very similiar to your "new Robin Hood" approach!