|Reviews for A Web Of Pearls|
| chishiki chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This is beautiful. You are a great writer. Loved every paragraph.
| Will.Hell.Minna.-Sophia Isobel chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
*sniff* I love happy endings when Doumeki sacrifices for Watanuki and Watanuki remains quiet but cries. _ love this!
| cheerful-pinkstar chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
The fic is touching! Especially when it's revealed what Doumeki wishes for! Overall I feel that this succeeds in evoking what xxxholic does :)
| anon azure chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
it was beautiful!
| Tears Parallel chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This was an extremely wonderful piece. I really loved how you continuously referred to Yuuko as 'She' throughout the whole entire story. It really gave a mysterious feel to it as well as a dreamlike quality.
The imagery is amazing; I really liked how you described Watanuki's pain after she left and how he continues to wish to see her once more. In the beginning I thought that he was only dreaming of Yuuko until you revealed that it was a spider trying to get his power (... which makes a whole lot more sense to me now that I think about it).
Words are so powerful in the story - it's what frees him, it's what makes him regret Yuuko's departure when he hasn't told her so many things, and it was the old man's price that later gives him the words to refuse the spider. It's like the story was written to tell about a moral/theme while having so much more to it. I really missed that quality of xxxHOLIC and I was pleased to find it in this story.
This is one of my most favorite lines :
"The house in which you dwell is haunted by demons," and the voice is not her voice but the voice of the darkness.
I think that's when I realized that the dream or person he was meeting with was the spider rather than what I thought before. Not to mention, I love how the sentence flows (though I can say the same for the whole story).
| mistyfoxdreams chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
This was a beautifully woven story!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/12/2012