|Reviews for Fly Free|
| MusicOfMadness chapter 40 . 16h
Wait, excuse me?! She dies? And you left that tidbit as a cliff hanger?! AND IT'S BEEN TWO YEARS SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED?!
I'm dying inside. How can I sleep knowing that?
I will hold out hope that you will someday return, though.
| Angella1012 chapter 40 . 6/14
Hope you update soon! Such and damn cliffhanger!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 40 . 5/4
Really hoping you get back into this story, very enjoyable
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 36 . 5/4
I think this is the first time I have seen any ideas for just gassing Gaara
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 28 . 5/4
...you know, that was probably the best example of character development for Sasuke that I have seen in any fic. Ever.
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 27 . 5/4
Surprisingly good fight here with Shikamaru, amusing at first but then a lot more serious for sure
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 20 . 5/4
Baki's POV was enjoyable not just for amusement but the writing was a good strong presentation
Yep, surprises throughout this chapter.
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 5/4
...yep, that is quite the reputation
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 5/4
Interesting for the 4th point, particularly with Zabuza
Like how you did Zabuza and Haku joining up, always like when they live but you put in a few new elements such as their initial hopes regarding Naruto.
Really enjoy all your comments about Robin's smiling here
Oooh, very good new idea for Robin's powers. Nice!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 5/4
Wow yes, very scary and very well done Robin. Definitely signs of Miss All-Sunday here. Liked how the fight went too, as well as the story of her legend that grew
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 5/4
LOL for the banter!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 5/4
Most times when author follow canon despite other changes it can be annoying, but Robin vs. Zabuza was still well done and believable. Also liked the small talk
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 5/4
LOL thanks for that! Especially the breathing fire
| Guest chapter 40 . 5/1
This story is really fantastic and interesting. keep up the good work!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 5/3
This was all a surprise twist for me, and I agree with your parts on the "Absolutes"