Reviews for Fly Free
MusicOfMadness chapter 40 . 16h
Wait, excuse me?! She dies? And you left that tidbit as a cliff hanger?! AND IT'S BEEN TWO YEARS SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED?!
I'm dying inside. How can I sleep knowing that?
I will hold out hope that you will someday return, though.
Angella1012 chapter 40 . 6/14
Hope you update soon! Such and damn cliffhanger!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 40 . 5/4
Really hoping you get back into this story, very enjoyable
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 36 . 5/4
I think this is the first time I have seen any ideas for just gassing Gaara
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 28 . 5/4
...you know, that was probably the best example of character development for Sasuke that I have seen in any fic. Ever.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 27 . 5/4
Surprisingly good fight here with Shikamaru, amusing at first but then a lot more serious for sure
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 20 . 5/4
Baki's POV was enjoyable not just for amusement but the writing was a good strong presentation

Yep, surprises throughout this chapter.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 5/4
...yep, that is quite the reputation
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 5/4
Interesting for the 4th point, particularly with Zabuza

Like how you did Zabuza and Haku joining up, always like when they live but you put in a few new elements such as their initial hopes regarding Naruto.

Really enjoy all your comments about Robin's smiling here

Oooh, very good new idea for Robin's powers. Nice!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 5/4
Wow yes, very scary and very well done Robin. Definitely signs of Miss All-Sunday here. Liked how the fight went too, as well as the story of her legend that grew
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 5/4
LOL for the banter!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 5/4
Most times when author follow canon despite other changes it can be annoying, but Robin vs. Zabuza was still well done and believable. Also liked the small talk
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 5/4
LOL thanks for that! Especially the breathing fire
Guest chapter 40 . 5/1
This story is really fantastic and interesting. keep up the good work!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 5/3
This was all a surprise twist for me, and I agree with your parts on the "Absolutes"
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