Reviews for A child's mistake
lotrprincess chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
It's not "BLEH", I enjoyed it! It's very true, though, that incredibly focused people NEED to have something to direct their determination toward.

"An alchemist is a creature that must always pursue truth. When he stops thinking, he stops living."
- Berthold Hawkeye
Mediterranean Tomatoes chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
That wasn't BLEH! That was amazing! Wonderful doorway into Ed's mind you painted there!
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Great story! So sad, but loved it! Poor Edward, it's not all of your fault.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
AW! *U* I LOVE these kinds of introspection fics! *U* SO AWESOME! *U* Ed's devotion to Al was so sweet! Rock on!