Reviews for And there it went
spacetraintotheUniverse chapter 1 . 8/2
I honestly came to look at this fic because I thought it looked interesting. However, there are just too many spelling and grammatical errors for me to enjoy it. For instance (because I don't just want to say "I don't like it," laugh, and run away): just because you think proper punctuation when writing speech looks stupid, does not mean you can just take it out. I'm sure that alone has lost plenty of readers. Also, the correction of "see" as opposed to "se", or forgetting the 'e' in words like "course" or "relatively" would drive off other readers like it has with myself.
rhizz17 chapter 7 . 7/18
update please
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 7 . 4/16
I'm in love with this story. Please update again really soon and thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/10
This story is so disorganized and full of grammar errors. Half of the time I have trouble keeping up with your confusing ideas... the misspellings and lack of punctuation don't help.
Mumia0813 chapter 7 . 11/7/2015
dont stop here ok? i like it.
Elfin69 chapter 7 . 10/18/2015
I wonder why they did not figure out that Sirius was not an actual dog when he was taken with her to the Spirit world. How will things change now that she is in the know instead of just Yusuke and how is his training going or has he not started
917brat chapter 7 . 10/13/2015
this is amazing and I would so love to read more of this so please keep this up and update it again soon.
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 7 . 9/27/2015
lol! Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 7 . 9/20/2015
I love it! **
Guest chapter 7 . 9/20/2015
I like story so far and can't wait for more to come. But I think you missed one, important part of the orginal Yu Yu plot ~"the Mirror of Forlorn Hope requires the soul of the person wishing on it as payment for fulfilling the wish; the only reason Kurama survived was because Yusuke offered his soul in exchange for Kurama's so he could have his wish come true without suffering the payment."~ If Yusuke id off explaining what is going on to Rai, who is there to help Kurama out and make sure he keeps his soul? The way you left it off now suggests that Kurama is going to die/is dead.

Also to the idiot that said you needed a reason to write (other then the simple love of writing of course), you are an extreme moron and you have no business on this sight if you need some other reason then the enjoyment of writing and wish to share your love/talent with others.
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geetac chapter 7 . 9/20/2015
I like the chapters
Reishin Amara chapter 7 . 9/19/2015
oh man,i cant wait to see more of this..been a while since I saw a YuYu fic updated..
Arrialee chapter 7 . 9/19/2015
Love your story so far u can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/18/2015
Good chapter!
Fangirll007 chapter 7 . 9/18/2015
When is Rei gonna meet Raizen?
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