|Reviews for Kālā paʻa|
| ellie.no.name chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
| Ku-chyan chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
I also was not a fan of Lori, but this makes me think how much more interesting she would have been as a love interest for Kono instead of Steve. I really liked this, they seem really beautiful together.
| clarembees chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
This was so beautiful. Like, I can't think of a better word to describe it. It was so absolutely gorgeous; the imagery, everything flowed so well and elegantly. I'm so impressed with your writing. Seriously, impressed. I've never really thought about this pairing, but they work together in this yin and yang way; much like McDanno. I hope you write more on them.