Reviews for A Friend
ghostpoet chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
Gonna update anytime soon? I remember you posted this story on heaven and earth one year ago when it only had four chapters I believe.

Don't throw its potential or put it for adoption!
Lyora chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
Loved it, as always!

sasuke was a bit OOC but I still loved it,

I'm expecting the next chapter will be a mission or a timeskip? But anyways, I don't really care, cuz am loving the story and am fine with anything you write! The new characters are amazing ! I think Naruto anime lacks a character like Hamaro (but they have Shikamaru which is similar)

All in all,

I loved this chapter and I hope it's not the last.

I love they way your write action scenes! They are so exciting. And have a nice day :3
Lyora chapter 6 . 5/11/2014
Loved this chapter! Actually am in love with the story !

Tho I expected hamaro to be with ryui when it came to team distribution.

all in all. I LOVED IT! and I read the two stories that had hamaro and ryui in them and they are also amazing. (Now am gonna read chapter 7 XD)
acetwolf94 chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE!
V-Vendetta chapter 7 . 3/12/2014
KEEP IT UP! You're doing amazing, and I truly mean this! I hope you update soon!

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V-Vendetta chapter 6 . 3/12/2014
Keep it up. You're doing amazing. Do NOT let flames get you down. If anyone gives you flames, simply counter-act it with a water type jutsu! _! - Thumbs up

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V-Vendetta chapter 5 . 3/12/2014
*cries, tears streaming down his face* Hmph. I'm not crying at the sappiness of this chapter! I'm not! Just got dust in my eyes!

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V-Vendetta chapter 4 . 3/12/2014
Little bit rushed for a chapter, couldn't quite feel the flow. I mean, it was there, but not as powerful as I would like it to have been. Carry on. _

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V-Vendetta chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
I love the development in this chapter, however Sayuki's mind shouldn't have changed that drastically within the first few hours. But then again, just my two cents. Onto chapter 4.

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V-Vendetta chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
Very nice. Very nice indeed. Still a little bit rough, but my stories are as well. I'll continue to read. Keep it up.

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V-Vendetta chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
You've reviewed my story, and now I'm taking a look at yours. Very good beginning, very good length for a chapter, and I'm finding myself about to head onto the next chapter. This chapter was rough around the edges, but most stories are when people first start writing. Keep it up.

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RCPMione chapter 7 . 1/23/2014
I doubt we've seen the last of Sasuke, can't wait for the next update. Keep writing!
willam and jack and jake chapter 7 . 1/18/2014
nice very well done can't wait to read more
sortofbored chapter 7 . 12/25/2013
Keep it up.
tuatara chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
I’m afraid this chapter wiped out what remaining interest I had in this story. Sorry and good luck.
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