|Reviews for Rapture: Interim|
| Sg-pix chapter 26 . 2/24/2013
Will this story continue? I'm enjoying the story of the sequel, especially the first story. I'm really surprised you created believable and unique OC, especially multiple ones. I often avoided stories with a couple of OCs since I seen quite a lot of annoying and out of context types, but your story got me to be worried and attached to some OCs that makes wonder will they pull through. I applaud you for amazing storytelling.
| HattFriend chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
"Can ya even talk?"
I shook my head again, pointing at my throat.
Oh my gosh, if Jack and Amanda were to have met, they totally would have been meant for each other!
I have to say, it's a pretty good story so far! I also like the way you combined There's Something in the Sea characters and the Civil War. It's pretty easy to understand and gives a lot of information since I've only read about There's Something in the Sea on the BioShock Wiki.
I'm pretty interested in the story so far!
| CaliforniaStop chapter 26 . 10/29/2012
This was such a good chapter, so action-packed and, even though I KNOW IT'S COMING, I'm still so shocked by all that's happening so far. Your writing really has picked up so nicely over the course of this story, which is a pleasure to see because you write so well!
I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how hospitable Cohen is xD I always imagine that he's like "My door is always open to you, little moth! (and if you play your cards right, my bedroom door too!)" ehehehehe.
I also love the angle you're putting on Fontaine. Goddammit I want to know more about what he said to Amanda!
Update this soon, pumpkin :)
| Techne chapter 26 . 10/27/2012
Wow, this chapter was rather strange from the rest of the ones. So weird how such a simple phrase could cause Jack to start having heart problems, guess everything wasn't as safe as they thought it was. They will seriously need to find a way to stop him from having heart failure, but for some reason I just don't see them being able to save him in time.
As for Fontaine, this guy can't die quick enough for me because he is really starting to get on my fucking nerves. What drives him to do all this? Does he think he's making the city safer? He's making it worse in the process of trying to justify his ways of making everything good.
| Storyteller222 chapter 26 . 10/21/2012
Ah another chapter from the great Eco Seeker, I find myself pleased that you were able to give us another update.
This Chapter is rather well but I have a question: Have you seen the new BioShock Infinite Trailer?
| Nikoangeli88 chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
Please update! I wanna see the end of this. U r a pretty good writer. :)
| Mr. Anonymous chapter 25 . 10/4/2012
Question: If you could hire people to do the voices of your O C characters in all your "sucked into the game" stories who would they be? Because some of them I can't picture what they sound like.
| Techne chapter 25 . 9/25/2012
NO! I just knew that someone wasn't going to make it through the attack launched by Fontaine. That it was Amanda's mother was no surprise, she's a secondary character. Amanda, Parker and Jack are to important to the plot to be killed; her being the only one there makes her the perfect target.
Now, the twist with Atlas actually being Fontaine freaked the fucking shit out of me! I had no idea that it was going to turn out this way and upon learning that, all I could think was how the hell had he pulled something so smooth off and not get found out.
| Techne chapter 24 . 9/24/2012
Wow, so Jack is Ryan's son, eh? Not that I'm surprised. I had a suspicion that they might be related from the previous chapter where Jack and Amanda first met, how she thought that he favored the man and now we know why. Those were some sick experiments that they were running on Jack (I'm assuming that was him in the video with the puppy), I would like to see some damn good vengeance brought on their asses for what they did.
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/20/2012
Finally an update, im so happy! Love this story so much!
| Nikoangeli88 chapter 25 . 9/20/2012
Please update! I am very curious to see what happens to Amanda and Parker, not so much Jack because we how his story unfolds. Hope they make it to the surface. Please keep going you are a great writer. :)
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/19/2012
Glad you decided to finish this story, can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/18/2012
OH SHIT that was intense. I can't wait for more!
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/18/2012
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/18/2012
I seriously squealed when I saw you had updated, not one but THREE chapters. And this could not have come at a worse time. I've got a major essay due TOMORROW (which I'm yet to start...) and so I don't need this distraction! But I can already feel myself clicking next... AH!
I'm so happy you updated. For a moment there I was afraid you had given up again, or your writer's block was too much. This was a fab chapter, very action-packed, and I loved the return of Sinclair! I can't wait to read on.
I'll be updating my fic soon. I've started playing Mass Effect though and it's seriously addictive so I'm afraid my love for the BioShock universe is somewhat diminished xP But I'm determined to finish what I've started, and I'm already halfway through the next chapter!