Reviews for End Game
Black Tulip chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
Oy vay, that was very disturbing but a really good read. Maybe it could have had a bit more aftermath, but I dunno... too much nightmare-and-crying stuff ends up being corny too. You actually had me a bit nauseous at one point, which, if you think about it, is sort of a compliment. After all, a good writer always wants his/her reader to FEEL stuff, whether good or bad.
Quille chapter 16 . 9/21/2012
Phew. I was scared that someone, Mac or Jo, would get hurt... When Ged was talking about Jo on the roof, I was sure one of them would loose it and ended up going after him and putting in danger. And I like that they managed to safe the other woman, it sure could bring at least some peace back to Jo.
Now you know what I'm waiting for ;) An update of the ''Journey to Nowhere". Although if it will be as intense as this one, I'm sure I end up biting all my nails to skin...
tlh45 chapter 16 . 9/20/2012
Awwww...finally, a happy ending! Glad Ged got what he deserved!
tlh45 chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
I hope it's Mac. I hope there is more Mac suspense...I'm a Mac junkie! Jo has been through enough and I hope her and Mac have their happy ending.
Lizzie Annee chapter 15 . 8/24/2012
Oh please let it be Mac that saves her :) i love this story ... I cant wait for the next chapter xxx
Quille chapter 15 . 8/24/2012
You are the most terrible person ever! How can you top in a moment like that? I so hope it is Mac who will kill this bastard, help Jo and shake her up really hard for doing something as stupid as she did! I need a next part :(
UrbanMuse chapter 14 . 8/16/2012
Wow. Sorry but I have to take some calming breaths before I can type any more - this story is so intense I'm pretty sure my fingers have been gripping the edge of my seat since I started reading it all at once a bit ago!
What a perfect mix of action, drama, suspense and the beginnings of a romance. And your pacing of the story is just right. Not revealing too much too soon but keeping up the interest nonetheless.
Great job of portraying Jo back at work after her ordeal - she's clearly not fully recovered - how could she be - and Mac knows it but they haven't confronted it yet.
I also love your use of flashbacks - Mac and Jo's kiss, Jo telling Mac about the stars keeping her safe, Ged forcing Jo through the forest. Really well done.
Can't wait to see what Jo does now.
Quille chapter 14 . 8/15/2012
I've just read your story from the beginning and I can't really tell how good it was! It's just a perfect mix of suspense, action, drama, romance. Everything I love! This Ged is one of a psycho! It so unbelievable for me that I am able to hate so much a fictional character. And I guess those fragments in italics, those wonderfully written retrospections are my favourite parts of your story. So sweet and romantic, but without putting too much sugar in it. I loved the thing Lindsay and Mac did with Jo's desk - it almost made me cry, so realistic and well shown.
And I like very much but you didn't make a Russ being a bad guy. He is kinda sweet, being still in love with Jo and saying about her those words, and yet being quite okay with her having feelings for Mac, like he just wanted her to be happy, even not with him. It was really touching.
I'm so glad that the story continues after they found Jo. The only thing I don't like is that Jo didn't tell Mac he called her in a last chapter. Her having some secrets from him ALWAYS means trouble in the stories and I think she was through so much already. I want Mac to save her from more harm, please, let him be the hero! :) I would wait on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Please update soon!
kitkatraina chapter 14 . 8/13/2012
greaaaaaat chapter! can't wait for the next one. please update ;)
Danielle chapter 14 . 8/12/2012
Only thing about this is that it takes you so long to update, It' my favorite but please, could you update sooner? Thanks so much for this one, btw!
josiegrace chapter 14 . 8/12/2012
About time lol update again soon
littlesweetcupcake chapter 14 . 8/11/2012
Jo can't lie to Mac! Not when so much is at stake!
FanOfFiction22 chapter 14 . 8/11/2012
Brilliant ! Continue soon !:)
tlh45 chapter 14 . 8/11/2012
I think Ged is a sick S.O.B. and I don't think he has any intent on turning himself in. I think he wants Mac to watch him with Jo and I think he wants to kill them both. It's a control thing! That's what I think. Now, can't wait to see what's next to see if I'm at all close to being right. Please hurry with the next chapter.
flowerchild29 chapter 13 . 8/1/2012
this is an awesome story!
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