|Reviews for Sarah jane adventures series six|
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/16/2016
Can you try to do chapter 3 please?
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
| Amber Jackson chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Well done, I love it ! :) x
| itsawhovian chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
Great! I like it!
However, to make it perfect you can put more full stops inside the speech marks when the speaker stops talking.
"Well, I reckon they're getting better, just like you are."
"Well I reckon they're getting better, just like you are"
Hope I helped.
| Torchwood Cardiff chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Great chapter. Need more Luke moments.:-)
| Torchwood Cardiff chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Great start so far.:-)
| sjamerlinfan chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
its really good i think you should keep it up the first episode was a good begining
| Clani Fan chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Very good story, I couldn't help but laugh at some of it. Please keep writing this looking forward to the next chapter.
| yeti100 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
an interesting start to things, it's good that there are authors like us to keep the sarah jane adventures going
| AmyBieberKetchum chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
This is really good and I hope you write more like this soon :) x