|Reviews for Rewritten story holds original title|
| TheWhiteTitan chapter 1 . 8/2
What was this story about again? Kinda forget about this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2
| That guy chapter 10 . 7/21
I would like to see naruto on full display, stop with the positive stuff and get a little, not a lot, but a little,edgy please. It would be nice addition to the story because, more then likely you took him after he almost got killed by saskue, but yea, more action from naruto. I know its negi but still...it's naruto and he's a badass.
| Fox Boss chapter 10 . 7/21
Harem Members(so far)
Negi: Ayaka, Chachamaru, Eva, Nodoka, Yue
Naruto: Asuna, Haruna, Kaede, Konoka, Setsuna
These are the harems that I see so far.
| Jose19 chapter 6 . 6/21/2015
I don't understand why he is so reluctant to be with girls it isn't like Orochimaru is trying one of his experiments on him or something similar.
| Jose19 chapter 4 . 6/21/2015
The pairing list that you are showing is very interesting but the one thing I can never understand why in the world does Negi have a Harem does the original Author have a pedophile problem because the girls are all older than him, and they should not be interested in him in any way.
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 6/21/2015
The hope is that Naruto gets stronger fast because in Negi the opponents are very powerful, and Negi becomes seriously Op in the story as it reaches the end.
| dude chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 6 . 2/28/2014
It's kind of annoying and borin how you stick Naruto in to the same thing as Negi at the same time, in his own manner, time and again.
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 9 . 2/28/2014
Yeah, changes from canon are seriously needed. I mean, Naruto is amusing, but completely irrelevant when it comes to canon.
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 10 . 2/28/2014
Mmmmmmm...it's decent. But, changes from canon would be nicer.
| Nero2498 chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
Uh, hate to say this, but you fucked up on the strongest spell. Negi is lightning- and wind-oriented, Eva is ice- and dark-oriented.
| duskrider chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
What about the Hawks for Naruto's new summon and multiple girls pairing after all that is the basic staple of Negima
| OBSERVER01 chapter 10 . 1/7/2014
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/30/2013