|Reviews for Healing the Wild|
| Cheile chapter 7 . 3/27
nice introduction of the police chief in Cartagena. i just hope the guy isn't crooked somehow. not surprised that he assumes that Kristin is dead, even though there's no body. since he doesn't know all the details, i figure he must be assuming that Diaz dumped her body somewhere. good for Nathan for putting his foot down about said assumption.
Diaz is getting grosser by the chapter. i want to kick his ass, LOL.
the last scene has me scared for Kristin now, that the next time she might not be so lucky. eeeeek :/ :chews nails:
| Cheile chapter 6 . 3/27
first off, i'm not sure how long ago this chapter was first published, but belated congrats on your baby's birth and i hope he is doing well :) and now on to the story.
i love that Bill is on to the fact that Nathan has an affection for Kristin, even if he doesn't pursue the matter for the time being. i hope he does later on, though ;)
second, uggh, poor Kristin having to put herself in that position to help Diaz get what he wanted. :shudder: i can imagine how awful she feels and that was before Diaz pretends to be all concerned for her welfare. ick! someone get her out of there!
(suggestion, i would put a warning A/N at the head of the chapter for its content, as it might disturb some people. better safe than sorry, IMO. you never know how some readers will react.)
| Cheile chapter 5 . 3/27
Ew ew ew, Diaz is such a creepster. Forget how his goons are looking at Kristin, I don't like how HE is looking at her!
aww, poor Lucas. I am glad to see Nathan being fatherly and there for him. Those were some of my favorite moments in canon so I love seeing it shown in fics :)
total LOL at Reese misjudging Lucas cuz he's so young. I can just picture the insulted look on Lucas' face, haha.
:mutters choice words about Diaz' last remark: Nathan is gonna make you regret the day you were born when he gets his hands on you, you jerk. just you wait :P
| jujuone23 chapter 8 . 1/26
Really enjoyed this chapter...very creative!i hope to read more soon. Love the prtoective nature of Nathan and Lucas toward Kristin and especially love Kristin as written!
| 123writer chapter 8 . 1/26
Yay! So glad you're writing this story again! I really like it can't wait to read more.
| jujuone23 chapter 7 . 1/4
Would love to read more from this wonderful story!
| Cheile chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
Aww poor Nathan feeling all guilty cuz of what happened! Love the action in this chapter.
| Cheile chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
So the flourishing of life on the reef and the effects Kristin's noticed on herself are not in nature. Very interesting! That Diaz guy is scary and i wouldn't want to meet him walking alone at night. Not surprised he's abusing the colonists for his own gain. I hope the crew can rescue Reese's little boy as well as their own. And ack, someone save Kristin!
Great chapter, look forward to reading more soon.
| Cheile chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
came back for another chapter before i dive into the homework cave. (school :P but it's gotta be done!)
love all the sciency talk over what they discovered about the little blue fish healing itself! no idea what half of it means, i am gonna have to google it later! but it sounds fascinating! the Nobel Prize mention is funny too and it's cute how Lucas fixates on it, hehe.
i wonder if Kristin handling that jewel caused the de-aging in her body. i am curious! i think she doesn't quite believe it herself which is why she's blowing everyone off when they bring it up.
and now for some trouble...gotta have excitement. i look forward to continuing soon!
["Do you see what I 'm seeing?"
"Yes, Cap. But she doesn't seem too thrilled to hear it from anyone. She looks amazing, though."
"That, she does."] - hehe, d'awww. (tho don't think the comma in that line is necessary. just MHO.)
| Cheile chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
a very neat beginning! i am curious to know if that orb is something special...i suspect that it may be. you have their voices down well, especially Nathan and Lucas going back and forth.
["We need a crowbar, first." Nathan spoke rationally.
"Crowbar?" Lucas looked disappointed. "Cap, come on. Get with the present. A laser cutter is so much more effective."
"Call me old-fashioned. Some things just work." Nathan defended himself.] - LMAO, priceless dialogue exchange there.
and :goggle: at the little blue fish having healed itself. something mysterious is afoot!
| Waltz Turner chapter 7 . 8/15/2013
Wow, exciting stuff! I was a bit skeptical at first, thinking the orb was going to be some supernatural magical object, but you kept us guessing and then explained everything in a scientific and rational way( not that SeaQuest never encountered supernatural, unexplained phenomenons ;))
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update! Glad that people still care about this fandom. I know I always will!
| darkin520 chapter 7 . 8/13/2013
Sorry for the late review. Life has been a little crazy, but I know you understand that. But this was a fab chapter. I love how worried Nathan is and wants to make sure Kristin's safe. I don't blame him.
Oh, gosh, poor Kristin. I feel so bad for her, and I love that she still has a bit of hope. I don't like how he told her it was her life now. No, it isn't! It can't be. I'm glad he didn't do anything more than talk to her. I was a little worried that way.
I love how Nathan is with Rodriguez, putting the smack down to not assume things about Kristin and what's happened or hasn't happened. He doesn't need any more worries filling his head than what are already there.
Oh, no! I can't believe the serum is only temporary, so what will this mean for Kristin? I hope they can get to her on time before she gets shot...or worse.
Fabulous! I eagerly await more! WELL DONE! :D
| GinnyStar chapter 6 . 5/8/2013
Congratulations on your new son.
| darkin520 chapter 6 . 5/8/2013
Well, first of all, congrats on the baby! I'm happy to hear that, and I'm also happy you've updated. I've missed this story.
This was a really good chapter. Of course, Nathan is so very worried about Kristin, and I love how the admiral notes that Nathan needs her, but he just brushes it off and says it's because she's part of the crew. LOL...we all know the truth. ;P
One thing I am slightly confused about is the fact that all of a sudden, Cynthia is involved. I reread the last chapter in case I missed something there, but you never mentioned her then...so I'm wondering if you forgot a part there.
No matter, the little act Kristin put on was amazing. I was very worried about her when Jorge got extremely friendly, but for once, thank goodness Diaz' cronies showed up when they did.
I loved the ending, and I am eagerly looking forward to more. Well done. :)
| Lynnp chapter 5 . 12/24/2012
Sorry, it's taken me so long to review. I feel really sorry for Kristin, so do hope she can be rescued before anything bad happens to her.