|Reviews for Welcome to the Fanfiction!|
| tinylittlerobots chapter 1 . 1/12
I really enjoyed this!
You write POV of Sato well. I'm excited to read more.
I watched this show in English dub, and as I read this I heard Satos voice, it was perfect. You capture it well.
I think the summary needs to be tweaked. Leave only the summary of the actual story and remove the personal bit as I feel it deters readers. The personal bit about yourself should be put in an authors note!
I feel for you though and I hope things gets better, I know what its like to have a mental health issue.
| tiny.little.robots chapter 3 . 1/12
I loved this chapter. You write amazingly.
I liked the bits of humour and the depression mixed in. Sato's description of the centipede was good.
I hope you continue you this if you have the time because this plot is fasinating and I like how in character you wrowrote Sato and Yamazaki and hownyou displayed their relationship.
| tiny.little.robots chapter 2 . 1/12
Loved this chapter. I praise you for capturing their relationship well!
The last bit in the end felt like it was written from series, good job!
| bloody raptor chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
interesting please continue.
| 19x19 chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
I like it, so far. Maybe you've given up? I think you have done a good job of capturing the characters. Of course coming up with a plot for them is another task...