Reviews for Bearing Witness
Jessica314 chapter 4 . 5/24/2014
very nice! I love all the extra little scenes and dialogue you've added. I hope you will continue sometime! Would love the see more meetings.
abbyweyr chapter 4 . 2/15/2013
In the book Eleazar was the one to tell them Bella was a shield. These have been good look at these meetings. Thanks for sharing.
abbyweyr chapter 3 . 2/15/2013
Irish coven up next. You cover Bella's multi-tasking mind really well.
abbyweyr chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
Liked the hole on bookshelf comparison to hole in her heart. Good chapter, the rearrangement works well.
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
So soon after the Denali family shows up, Peter and Charlotte would have noticed the car out front. Nice telling of this time.
QueenElsaSalvatore chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
so have you seen breaking dawn part 2 yet
PiperandHollyFan chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Can't wait for more! :)
kiwihipp chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
That was really cool! I think you have filled out on the Irish Coven, so that they are someone instead of just another group. The feeding situation was well managed by Edward. Even Bella and Renesmee get to feed!
Team Edward Rules All chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
Update :)
PiperandHollyFan chapter 2 . 2/13/2012
I love it! Can't wait to read more. I would like to see the Irish coven meet Renesmee. Update soon!
Team Edward Rules All chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
Great chapter ;) You should do the Denali sisters reaction next.
kiwihipp chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
What a nice way to introduce Renesmee to Peter and Charlotte. I love how you seem to be able to find the missing angles to the story.
Team Edward Rules All chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Great start! Update :)