Reviews for The Visitor
Reneebird chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I always wondered what it would be like if one or both of Martin's parents came back. Can't wait for more!
Chapin chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Cheek! What absolute cheek for her to show up like this. Little wonder you all are remaining anonymous - sort of like the witness protection program. We are fastening our seat belts. The possibilities are legion - frighteningly so. Especially, where will Martin's emotions take him? So go ahead if you must. We are ready, I think.
fanficfan71 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
A great start, a wonderful idea having Martin's Mum turn up on his doorstep. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Biscuit50 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Brilliant bring Martin's mother into the picture. You have portrayed her perfectly. Martin and his "lodgers" are in for a rough ride I think. Look forward to reading more.
3211 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Hi, really enjoyed this chapter, very well written and could imagine the characters expression very well, cannot wait for the next chapter (s) !

Thank you
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