|Reviews for Struck By A Smooth Criminal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
Go fall down a hill dumbass, only an Idiot would write something like this
| TeamSparkles chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
That was very funny
| Rosetin chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This was so funny,I didn't see that coming. LOL. Good job :)
| Stardiouses chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
You traumatized me :(
| AsianIdiot16 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Wtf...? That was...some ending! Did u just give up writing an actual sexified ending and just write crack instead? That was so funny but so weird!
| Erota chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
| NKIqbal chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I don't think I've ever laughed so hard in my entire life! Absolute genius!
Namra aka Nimzie
| kenzi chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I AM LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW
| Cattastix chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Um, what did i just read? Now excuse while I go die of laughter.
| 8847bella chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
At first I was thinking Dafuq then LOL this is really good and funny but I have about 500 questions about the shark and umm what else happened
| lunaloveshersola chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Hahahahahaha! Loved the ending.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
? Why did a shark eat sebastians penis? And why was it in santanas vag? So many questions
| boooootiful chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :))) dafuq just happened?
although, i do kind of ship them.. that was very awesome :))
| EdwardsBella4eva chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Haha awesome story, that ending was epic!