|Reviews for Take The Tumble|
| bookie wookie chapter 67 . 12/1
This was a very good story, the plot was amazing and very interesting. One thing that I noticed a lot though is the fact that there were many typos. A way to fix this could be to just read through it all once and correct typos as you go. Many include not typing s at the end of words that should be plural, and when typing words like it, so, or of you would only type on letter like t, o, or f instead. Another little thing is that in Brittain children refer to their mothers as Mum. Also I think Scorpius Malfoy would be forced to refer to his parents as Mother and Father, as manners. Overall this story was very good and interesting
| CelestialEnchantress07 chapter 1 . 11/5
Wow, what a premise! I’m glad I came across this story when it’s completed because I can’t get enough!,
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/19
i totally like the new versions! Keep writing! Lots of love :* :*
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 67 . 10/17
I loved the story sooo much I couldn't stop reading.
I have also read a few of your other works.
| Lele Pons chapter 4 . 10/11
Learn how to spell graN u fuckin idiot
N not M
Overall pretty good
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 28 . 9/22
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 27 . 9/22
Remi, Millie, Emily, and Annon are so going to get married together.
They're perfect for each other.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 26 . 9/22
I feel like there will be A TANK FULL of food,
know how much the Weasleys' family eats.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 25 . 9/21
Is Hermione not mad that her daughter is shagging someone in secret?
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 24 . 9/21
I bet you Rose and Scorpius will have twins, one with red hair and the other with blondish white.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 23 . 9/21
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 22 . 9/21
Now that they have both met each other's parents,
all they have to do it wait in till they are of age,
Then Scorpius gets a ring and proposes.
And everyone lives happily ever after except for Scorpius,
cause he will be hunted for the rest of his life,
By Fred Jr., James, and Albus, and maybe everyone else in the world.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 21 . 9/21
What is the twins heard or Draco or Astoria?
That would be awkward.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 20 . 9/21
I thought Astoria was too weak to have kids after Scorpius.
| Owl-Girl-0072 chapter 19 . 9/21
Rose just met Scorpius's dad.
And technically Rose and Scorpius are dating...