|Reviews for Dear Child|
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/15
I don't like how Draco and Hermione's been co-workers for about a decade before they "found out they cared for each other." Shouldn't they have known before that? And why does this seem to be their first case together?
This story is both slow-paced and terribly quick.
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/15
The sperm is that old?
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/15
I don't like how the investigation is dragged on like this. There seems to be only one incident per month. Why couldn't they look at Nott's body the same month they discovered him dead? Why wait a month? Unless that happened at the end of the month, like this happened at the start of them month (it seems to continue right where the previous month dropped off). Still, it's not a new day. It's the same night, so I don't know why it's callled Month Eight.
| dianm chapter 1 . 10/28
I always want this kind of story...independent hermione with artificial insemination
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/2
I really enjoyed this fan fiction. I liked how you progressed the character's development but stayed true to who they are. I also enjoyed how Draco's change was subtle but profound. There were lots of twists and turns which make for a great story, too. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors and misspellings so if you haven't, I'd suggest proof reading it. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your writing.
| Nikki Pond chapter 15 . 3/26
To be honest, I wasn't surprised because I had suspected Vivian and Ron. But the story was great and adding a mystery. The story was written well, and I enjoyed reading it.
| dramioneotp chapter 16 . 4/22/2014
love this story! that was really great! i really enjoyed it!
| TrixieNancy124 chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
Omg that was so cute! I read this all in one sitting. Great job!
| ExTaCy925 chapter 16 . 9/15/2013
It was cute loved it
| LilacRosez chapter 16 . 7/23/2013
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 16 . 3/30/2013
| tris chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
Umm. I don't know about this one.. I mean the overview of the story was about the hermione and the baby but then it's like the murders took over the story and the dramione aspect was put on the back burner. I never got any feeling that hermione and draco liked each other but were only tolerating each other. There really was no romantic interaction between them till the end. I mean u kept saying during the story that hermione thought he changed but his haughty attitude towards her was there throughout. I don't know.. Good try though. Not my cup of tea but there are readers for every story
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/5/2013
it was lovely...I thought that it will be weird after they found out he is her father, but it was ok :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
I am surprised that nobody mentioned that child will miss a father...its ok to raise a child by herself, but its never the same with both parents...
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I'm not sure I like where this is going...I know women do it, but still...she is still young...
and I find it hard to believe that Malfoy would want to be sperm donor...