|Reviews for Dear Child|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/1/2017
I don't like how Hermione is portrayed here. She's a headstrong, intelligent, sensible and sharp woman. And she seems to play second fiddle to everything Draco does most especially in the muggle method of investigation. When did she become so docile? The Hermione Granger I know isn't like that.
| zeethefangirl1703 chapter 9 . 6/14/2017
I know this is years too late, but I'm hoping the name is Lyra or Aurora.
| Jojo15.01.1974 chapter 16 . 1/21/2017
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/13/2016
Ugh..I was actually SO into this fic until you named Ron as the killer. Not a fan of him being the killer when he was sweet before that!
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/12/2016
Its so cute
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/15/2015
I don't like how Draco and Hermione's been co-workers for about a decade before they "found out they cared for each other." Shouldn't they have known before that? And why does this seem to be their first case together?
This story is both slow-paced and terribly quick.
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/15/2015
The sperm is that old?
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/15/2015
I don't like how the investigation is dragged on like this. There seems to be only one incident per month. Why couldn't they look at Nott's body the same month they discovered him dead? Why wait a month? Unless that happened at the end of the month, like this happened at the start of them month (it seems to continue right where the previous month dropped off). Still, it's not a new day. It's the same night, so I don't know why it's callled Month Eight.
| Aquary chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
I always want this kind of story...independent hermione with artificial insemination
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/2/2015
I really enjoyed this fan fiction. I liked how you progressed the character's development but stayed true to who they are. I also enjoyed how Draco's change was subtle but profound. There were lots of twists and turns which make for a great story, too. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors and misspellings so if you haven't, I'd suggest proof reading it. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your writing.
| Nikki Pond chapter 15 . 3/26/2015
To be honest, I wasn't surprised because I had suspected Vivian and Ron. But the story was great and adding a mystery. The story was written well, and I enjoyed reading it.
| dramioneotp chapter 16 . 4/22/2014
love this story! that was really great! i really enjoyed it!
| TrixieNancy124 chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
Omg that was so cute! I read this all in one sitting. Great job!
| Extacy925 chapter 16 . 9/15/2013
It was cute loved it
| LilacRosez chapter 16 . 7/23/2013