Reviews for Hysteria Mode: A Sniper's Guide
Kcaz chapter 1 . 2/1
damn writer, doesn't seem to be continuing the story. hopefully someone can pick up from there the writer left off in a new fanfic
sen whitefox mako red demon chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
love it so far just found it too
TheSilverEagle22 chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
Lots of potential. I like it and I can't wait for more!
MoonliteNightmare chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
great story
ImawesomeNinja chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Please please update this very story
Rena chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Very good
3stanKyle chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
This is so good. Please add more
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Make more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Sifter21 chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
Really nice chapter, love it so far.
Nakashima Hatsuharu chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
Wow! Honestly this was a good chapter. Kinda short but dies the Job! Thanks!
victor janus chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
you said reki once where you probably meant rico (meh things like that happen). you also had one noticeable grammar mistake (there could be more but since i didn't notice them they don't really matter)
over all your writing style is good and your pairing is straight this makes one of vary few on this site.

as for my comments on the the reviews what i don't understand is the no sex part. this is a m rated story that means that there are either lemons or that there is going extreme violence. i know most stories stop on here before they get to either bur does this mean you thought this was going to be a violence story. meh i wouldn't be worried about it the lemons here are better then 90% on this site and is not sacrificing the story in any way so i don't see the problem.

all in all favorited.
victor janus chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
this is good. maybe the character development of reki was fast but its not as if she didn't have feelings she just couldn't express the vary well so all is good.
it was an excellent lemon. most people in fan fiction can't do near as well.
lets continue reading. hopefully i shall find even more good storytelling
victor janus chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
hmm well i'd have to say that the first thing that came to my mind is that since this fic is based on the books is that kinji is totally out of character. this kinji is the same guy who in 7 books has only admitted that he might be falling in love with a girl twice? and thats counting the one that consisted of he might be lying to himself about the depth of his feelings for aria as the most obvious of them. when it comes to guessing weather girls like him he is a thousand times worse. he's not only completely unable to perceive female emotions he actively resists any and all evidence. i mean this guy got kidnapped, at gunpoint was forced to marry reki, and she tells him he is the most important thing in her life and that she wants him also she implys he is the path of light in the darkness not to mention the stoping of her committing suicide... and he shrugs this all aside on the fact that the marriage was originally her family's idea and comes to the conclusion that they are deep friends. i mean the dude didn't even recognize why aria was a 'little distressed' when he put a ring on her ring finger on her birthday which he heard rico say A-kun should expect something romantic.
that said i can see why you use the less anti social idiotic attitude of anime kinji. after all with book kinji its impossible to have romance (just in case he gets less stupid later i'll say i have only read to the end of volume 8 chapter 1) and i admit i like the anime kinji better because i don't have to yell you f'ing dumb ass at him constantly.
other then kinji gaining emotional IQ points out of nowhere i thought it was rather good. i'll keep reading and hope you keep up the good work.
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