|Reviews for Moonlight in San Francisco|
| Emily chapter 10 . 8/28
I read this one first! You are spot on with keeping Ironside in character. Other writer write well but it seems they don't understand how Raymond Burr played Ironside as well as you do. Great story from start to finish!
| Anxious chapter 10 . 8/10
A lovely story,. well planned, and full of intrigue. Somehow I have the feeling that Ironside is in for another disappointment with Barbara. Will she come back to him? Will she become Lois again. What about the girls? Will they be receptive to having Ironside as their stepfather? There are many questions concerning the lives of Ironside and Barbara going forward. A new story needs to be written that will corral all these questions and reveal if Ironside and Barbara will be compatible. Is there a sequel to this story that will deal with Ironside and Barbara going forward? I hope so. 8/11/17
| dapper dog chapter 5 . 6/27/2014
Don't they ever have sex
| moms5thchild chapter 10 . 3/29/2012
I really enjoyed this story too. I always thought that the Chief and Barbara were a wonderful pair and the way that that story line was handled was sad and unfulfilling. I probably should go to bed, but there are more stories to be read. I will catch up with all your fics soon.
| bluesybelge chapter 10 . 3/21/2012
Great ending and it's leaving open a lot of possibilities. I'm glad you didn't kill her but then again
... she just left.
I just love your stories. Looking forward to the next adventure of my all time favorite cop.
| Swissmounty chapter 10 . 3/20/2012
Thanks for this story!
And I look forward to "aunt Victoria" - love her!
| lemonpig73 chapter 10 . 3/20/2012
Oh well...you didn't kill Barbara. You're not as cruel as I am. lol Or are you keeping her death for another story?
Nice ending: Ironside is not heart-broken but his future with Barbara is uncertain. Will you write more about them? Marry them maybe? Kill Barbara on her wedding day?
I have enjoyed this story a lot (the 3 episodes are among my favs too) and am looking forward to reading you again soon. : )
| bluesybelge chapter 9 . 3/14/2012
Jimmy Chard. Well I'll be damned. Never thought of that guy. It's one of my favorite episodes.
This time the Chief can forget the bathtub :-)
And no time to prepare something to defend himself.
I really wonder what you will let him come up with to defend himself and hopefully save Barbara too.
| lemonpig73 chapter 9 . 3/14/2012
Oooh, I wonder what will happen next? I'm still convinced that you are going to kill Barbara, so will she be stabbed or shot at? Maybe in an attempt to protect the Chief?
Please post again soon! : )
| Swissmounty chapter 9 . 3/13/2012
The story seems to take up speed.
How are you going to save the Chief this time?
| lemonpig73 chapter 8 . 3/10/2012
"Sure enough his scull had been caved by some kind weapon."
No wonder weapons have a bad reputation: even kind ones kill! lol :D
Despite all the mistakes and missing words, I am enjoying this story and cannot wait for the next installment.
It's gonna be a loooooooooong week. :(
| Swissmounty chapter 8 . 3/10/2012
"What bright side?" he asked skeptically.
Ironside lifted one of the lists and pointed it at Randall. "These lists contain not one single person you will have to protect from becoming victims."
"Ironside scanned the area and settled upon a large rock that was under a bench."
I sure would like to know why that blood-covered rock was there.
| bluesybelge chapter 7 . 3/5/2012
This is some kind of a killer. But I feel he is beginning to get nervous as things do not always work out as planned. First the Chief's female staff and then who? Ed? Mark? And yes why not Barbara.
Looks like you have still some surprises for us coming up. I'm eagerly looking forward to it.
| lemonpig73 chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Now that we know for sure that Vic is not the killer, what will happen to Barbara? I bet on her being murdered.
"Is Mark going to live with us forever?" Hahaha, love it! : )
| Swissmounty chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Sorry for Jill. I already liked her.
It's good to know that the Chief will finally get the murderer.