I'm just ajkfvjrrfjyd about this story. In a good way of course. I love it. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.

Poor John. But Sherlock (assume it's Sherlock?) is very obvious in this chapter, when is John going to realise it's him!

aww I love this! I would love to see what would happen next :D

D'awwwwww

I really like this , it's very good , I loved the end of chapter 3 x keep it up :)

Aww, somebody's got their eye on John! :)