|Reviews for Bleach Second Gen Return of the Espada|
| mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 1/26
This is gonna be one of the best fanfics yet! :D And here is my OC.
Name: Shao Lang Vega
Age: 27 years old (in humans years)
Appearance: He is Ggio's twin brother but with smooth shoulder length hair, and wears a sleeves martial arts shirt, hakama pants and black martial arts shoes and he has a red sash around his waist.
Zanpakuto Info: His Zanpakutos are called Tigre Cazador and it looks like a pair of daggers and the command release is Hunt Down. In Resurrected form he gets a white and black stripped tiger themed armor and a ninja mask that covers his mouth and nose, he gets enhanced speed and strength and he three blade like claws in his arms.
Mask Fragment: A smilidon skull in his head like a helmet but without the left fang.
Likes: His girlfriend Mila Rose, music, reading, fighting for fun, babysitting children.
Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, arrogant people, Aizen.
Extra Info: To avenge his brother's death, Shao Lang left Hueco Mundo and allied with Soul Society to help defeat Aizen once and for all.
| Lu Bane aka 'Adm. ThunderCock chapter 7 . 1/25
I thought you just died or something. Does this mean I'll have to send my bio again?
| MissMakaraCaptor chapter 6 . 4/7/2012
Ooooohhh! :D I'm so excited for the next chappie!
| CelestialxXxAngel chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
they will come to soul society !
i wonder if the rest know about hazel true heritage...
how will the rest reacted if they know that hazel is aizen son i wonder...
great chapter :D
update ! XD
| Lu Bane aka 'Adm. ThunderCock chapter 6 . 4/3/2012
awesome, another update! And alot sooner than I expected! Wow, I now know what you meant when you said things in Soul Society were going to change. A full rebellion is not what I had in mind, but I like it!
| CelestialxXxAngel chapter 5 . 4/3/2012
update ! update ! XD
| darkmachines chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Oh, I'm very excited! Can't wait to read what will happen.
| Lu Bane aka 'Adm. ThunderCock chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Hm, I wonder what my character, Malik, is up to. I haven't heard anything from him, so I guess he's just chilling out somewhere.
| Seer-fear chapter 4 . 3/23/2012
Name: muerente temeroso
Age:looks 17 but real age he tells is 113 if he tells anyone though it is 623 years
Gender:male he wears white baggy pants like ulqiuorra but his top covers his chest with clip buckles going diagonally down from his right shoulder to under his left ribs and his hollow hole is right were a human heart would be
Zanpakuto Info: his sword is a mirror hilt like glass when sealed and the blade is silver steel. when released the sword hilt turns black and the blade turns into a mirror type steel that gives a perfect reflection.
The release command is
see, cronometrador meaning time keeper
It allows him to see 1 min ahead of the current time line on the current time line but can be detered by undecided actions. His mask changes to cover his hole face leaving only eye and a crack in the form of a line were his mouth would be.
He has a seguda etapa but refuses to use it as it allows him to see though all of times events completely. Without error leaving only the possibility to overpower him which is why he refuses to use it he thinks no one should have that kind of power. And mask covers over his eyes but the crack by the mouth remains
Mask/ Mask Fragment:the fragment us a smooth piece of mask over his left eye covering down to his ear with hair falling over it (ebony black hair)
Likes: reading, learning, being alone to think, and chess
Dislikes: people who pester him, stupid questions, showing emotion which he does show fractions of emotion in stressful times
Extra Info: reatsu level is between ichigos and ulqiuorras is a masterful tactician and prefers not to use sword or release due to it's power. He shys away from people. He is straight to the point and is well worded and educated but does not remember his life. His tone is always serious and he never jokes. Most importantly he is a natural born arrancar, born from his mask braking off on it's own after he fought off two vaste lorda and was at the brink of death. Though this pertains to the zanpakto his inner world is a desert filled with floating book cases on history and everything he has ever read floating in the air. His zanpakto in his world just had a long black robe with a black hood over his face
If you make him a espada make him what ever rank you please
Please put him in if you can
| darkmachines chapter 4 . 3/7/2012
Very nice, can't wait to read what will happen next.
Also in your story Skullak would be married to Cirucci like Grimmjow is to Nelliel and Starrk is to Harribel.
| Lu Bane aka 'Adm. ThunderCock chapter 4 . 3/6/2012
Man, I was seriously wondering what was going through those captains' minds, but I'm glad to see they're not evil.
Wow, GrimNel. I know that's a pair that's done often, but it never fails to keep me asking 'How on Earth did that happen?'
| CelestialxXxAngel chapter 4 . 3/6/2012
nice chapter !
thanks for mentioning my oc :)
update ! XD
| Pikuni Kon chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
pss I forgot the mask fragement, it is a headband with a raven on it. Her zanpakuto is a katana, with a red, black hilt. She has 2 release forms, like Ulquiorra Cifer her second one is called Cuervo Demonio Escarlata(Scarlet Demon Raven)Her katana is on her left, she is right handed.
| Pikuni Kon chapter 3 . 2/27/2012
... This chapter is great! p.s I forgot to add my likes/dislike. Here they are.
Likes: Ravens, Cats, Bats, Music, and yeah
Dislikes: Aizen, Gin, Tousen,Nnoitra, Flowers etc
| Pikuni Kon chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
LOL I LIKE THIS STORY! Found it a bit late though anyway, is it okay if I want you to add my oc in it? here is the details:
Name: Kurotsuki Cifer(Black Moon)
Age: 14(looks like a teenager)
Race (Shinigami, Hollow, Human, etc.): Arrancar
Zanpakuto Info (Bankai, Shikai, Resurrection, etc.)Resurrection:Cuervo escarlata(Scarlet Raven)
Mask/ Mask Fragment (If hollow, vizard, Arrancar, etc.)
Extra Info:Has Black Midlength straight hair, with scarlet tips, arrancar uniform comprimises of a skirt with a black bow ribbon, and a loose singlet, with black lines. Ulquiorra Cifer's younger Sister, pale white, with scarlet eyes. Short. And is admired by many. Stronger than Grimmjow Jeagerjaques. To her death is Misery and Pain. Mashocist and Sadist(Maschodist) Loves the taste and colour of blood. Nickname is Vampire.