Reviews for Box of Salt
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Daaaammmmmm! That is pretty dark supreme!
OspreyEmblem chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
notyourleo chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Woah, this is haunting. o_e But great! :D
rebecca chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
In english my class just read 1984! I think that your piece, while just as disturbing as you said it would be, is very accurate. It sent chills down my spine, but I think that that it what it was supposed to do.

I should probably get back to writing my take-home analytical essay on what makes us human ...

**sigh** i'll do it later ...

But your piece is very well-written.
NinjaInAnImaginaryLondon chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Woah. This is some deeeeep stuff. Really good; but deep and depressing. High-five, fellow 1984 fan!

DarkDramaLady chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This is really good! The tearing flesh is disturbing. Very. What type of monster would do that? Wait, don't answer. I don't want to know.
alljuststories chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
That was an assignment for school? Amazing... 1984 sounds like an interesting book. I should read it. Isn't torture just lovely? :P
InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Fire flicks to ice, and ice burns like fire as the hands grind salt into the gaping wounds, wrangling a sound out of me that doesn't seem even remotely human.

My word... *Shudders* This is powerful, haunting stuff. Not much more to say!