Reviews for Marvolo Mortimer: Rise of the Dark Prince
waternymph569 chapter 9 . 1/10/2015
Please please update i love the story is there a reason as to why you haven't updated in ages? If possible i'd like the next chapter to be unforgivable
movielover312 chapter 9 . 8/26/2014
update soon please I love the plot and everything else about this story except that you haven't updated in almost 2 years.
Gotham Champion chapter 9 . 5/6/2014
I do not care, just update again.
Lady Akina chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
I want to ruin James' life. I mean seriously, he lied straight to Lily's face about having another son. I say they expose some way, but don't let him know he is alive. Like post the records from the orphanage that he was there for 2 years or something. I am curious about what's going to happen next. Please UPDATE!

-Lady Akina
burntblood.1982 chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
snape should be dark and harry should kill the light
Guest chapter 9 . 3/14/2013
Great fic so far, wish you will update soon.
Io's Torment chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
Quite interesting and a good use of new characters inserted. I rather enjoy a [mostly] sane Voldemort, and I like your Bella, Cassi, Orion characters. I think I would like to read more, but there hasn't been much of a plot yet. Your writing is well done though, and nice to read.
Ceti H. Black chapter 9 . 1/19/2013
Sayu Koishimoto chapter 9 . 1/15/2013
the people from the light side are fuckers ... they should SUFFER!
Have you thought about making it a slash? hoho

ps: i vote for the-boy-who-went-missing c:
Doctor Dandy chapter 9 . 11/23/2012
Unforgivable sounds much better. Thanks for the read.

- Thorndsword
FraggleGaggles chapter 9 . 11/3/2012
I liked the latest chapter.I also like the orders POV as well as harrys.
How old is Harry?
Fireotaku18 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
Loved! Can't wait to read more!
Stormshadow13 chapter 10 . 9/17/2012
Very nice chapter. I really liked the bit between Harry and Sirius.

I also liked the way that you switched povs.

I'd like to see the old goat try to look into why Harry went missing. I hope he gets some hard truths and chokes on one of his lemon drops.

I enjoied reading about the battle. Very nice. Hope to see more of the Death Eaters in future chapters.
sarah-rose76646 chapter 10 . 9/17/2012
It's not as much interesting as the summary and the first few chapters made it out to be. Many spelling errors, like 'made' instead of mad, 'you' instead of us and similar instances where it's very jarring to suddenly read a word and fetter about it's use, waste a minute thinking and re-reading it and realizing that it's typo or error.
Ruins the flow and the mood.
Sorry, but i'll pass. Maybe i'll try it later, when you have some experience under your belt and a beta reader at your side.
sarah-rose76646 chapter 9 . 9/17/2012
Good, you've posted chapter 9.
Now take off this damn AN!
It is against FF rules to have an "AN" posed as a chapter. Do it now, as otherwise you'd lose many chapters and reveiws if you take it down later on.
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