|Reviews for Pass|
| strangeJenny chapter 1 . 1/28
I liked this one-shot. It has good characterisation,of Max and Alec. The plot has tried to be tackled many times before, but your take on it was good. Even the bits of what you didn't say, were good.
- a Scottish reader
| sandy.morganlopez chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Omg. ALL you DA stories are fantastic. The way you write the chemistry and scenes between Alec and Max are perfect. ;)
| TheCauldron chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
| XxHisLilLoverGirlxX chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
is that really all your going to give us! you had me all hot and bothered expecting a nice long hot steamy lemon and you leave with a cliff hanger and say its complete! im so upset right now its not even funny! good though... very good!
| scmumsy chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Good job. I like Alec & Max instead of her and Logan.
| Make war not love. war is fun chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
| PoisonAngelMuse chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
| PokeyDotes chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
I've read this whole scenario several times now, but this has to be one of my well done.
| alexis8820 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
This is a really great story would love to see what happened next
| Defective Illusions chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
| SquallCullen chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Short, sweet and filled with the promise of Mac/Alec fueled sexy time. Loved it!
| anneryn7 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
| Belmene chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
So Hoooootttt ! Another one please !
| ZkKtTysoul chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Um... wow! The temp in my room grew ten degrees. Good detail.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
How could you stop it there? This is amazing btw, i really loved it. Max and Alec are amazing together. :)