Reviews for Unintended
Guest chapter 8 . 9/14/2017
Oh, I liked this one really! One thing I missed was some more intimacy! You described the kiss so shortly... Almost platonic... And maybe I was hoping for some lemon...

Another thing: You wrote the story in 2012. Now 5 years have passed and with the legend of Korea, we know a few things more about Toph. I just love the idea that Lin wasn't Sokkas daughter but Suyin was. So there was a relationship between Sokka and Toph but much later! Maybe Toph was in a relationship with the Duke and he died and Sokkas relationship with Suki lasted longer but didn't work out as well?

I would appreciat a story like that especially from a writer with such skill!
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 8 . 7/9/2014
This story is amazing. Seriously...words cannot describe how utterly detailed and fantastic this is. It's written beautifully first off and all the emotion...WOW! Literally, my brain's still trying to take it all in. And that ending made my heart all flutter-y. An epic story, truly.
Crazy With Happiness chapter 8 . 2/15/2014
I absolutely loved this!
Amereld chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
This was SO Good! I am so impressed! I love you! This story's awesome!
Different Child chapter 8 . 7/28/2013
FEELS O THE TOKKA FEELS! luiewghreahgr. I'm just. In love. I shipped it before but OMFG. I JUST HAVE EXPLODED RECENTLY WITH ALL THESE TOKKA FEELS AND I NEED A PLACE FOR THEM AND JUST 4elurghgraelghaweighlwaghiegh/
Rayneken chapter 8 . 3/18/2013
I am just completely amazed by you right now! That was fantastic-I just can't stop smiling! Your work is truly beautiful.
TheDimensionOfWords chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
Perfect ending for a perfect story! Great writing!
Statue chapter 8 . 11/2/2012
I know you wrote this a while ago, and I haven't read much on this site so excuse me if I'm being unreasonable, but PLEASE write more. I can see that you have worked on a bunch of other stories from other show universes, but perhaps I can persuade you with sincere flattery and praise.

I've only been an avatar fan since my brother got me to watch the whole thing, and then LOK, in a week, a few months ago, but now it's my favorite. I've only begun to crave fanfiction after watching the whole series over several times, and I've read a few, but yours are almost unparalleled. I read this series today after reading reamalgamation, and both struck me as going so much deeper than they needed to. You could have just told a story, but instead you made it so much more meaningful. You made it much more real. You told the story and then explained, and nothing behind it was simple, it was messy and complicated, but that made it even better because that's how real life is sometimes, and things don't just sort out like we want them to. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you wrote something beautiful and I want more.

Thanks for making Tokka not be out of character and seem impossibly fake, thanks for keeping it in line with both atla and lok, and thanks for writing this. (more please? for me?)
Super Reader chapter 8 . 10/7/2012
Ahh! What a lovely, lovely story! I have no idea why I haven't read it sooner. Although unfortunately, Avatar has been far from my mind in recent months, I suddenly had a yearning for Tokka and was lucky enough to find this! Forgive me if I now stalk and fav-bomb the rest of your stories. :) My favorite part of this was how in character everyone was. I'm no longer 13 and usually can't enjoy a fanfiction if the characters are OOC. This was perfect and I could imagine this happening easily. Fantastic job and what an emotional roller coaster ride you put me through! I enjoyed every minute of it. :)
veteranfangirl chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
To put it simply... I just have a lot of feelings about this fic. So many feelings. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/18/2012
This had me gnawing my fingers out of nervousness! Well done! You do Tokka proud
BlindBandit217 chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
What a great ending! I have loved reading this whole story...may I just say that you are a fabulous writer? keep writing! the world deserves a great writer like you!
Johannas mirror chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
Oh my god tears everywhere
hpswst101 chapter 8 . 6/7/2012
Beautiful job. You did an excellent job on this work. Thank you for writing, it was perfect. :) Especially the ending. ;)

Himmelslied chapter 8 . 5/13/2012
This was one incredible sweet Tokka fanfiction and it was a pleasure reading it! (:
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