|Reviews for Until the End of Time|
| Daughter of Iron America chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I'm... dead inside.
| Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I like the theme, but i feel the story so rushed... O.o that i didnt enjoy it completely.
still thanks for sharing this
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Ignore the mean flamer! This story was sad and bittersweet but still nice. If you are willing to do a sequel (or prequel) I would like to know why Matt hid his disease or how/when they got the engraved rings or perhaps an afterthought of how Tai deals with Matt's death. These are just a couple of suggestions. As for your writing style it's fine. I would reccomend you to add more details and give us a better idea of how the characters feel or will react to such a situation a bit more. Now if you'll excuse me I have more Taito to read!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
That was one of the shittest things I've ever read in my life.
Learn to write. And plot. But mostly just to write.