|Reviews for From Hell's Heart|
| NA chapter 12 . 4/25
Can you give us some sign your still alive and haven't abandoned this. I really want to see this continue.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/26
Sorry, I accidentally reviewed the first part without doing the problem. Assuming the plasma takes a minute to travel through space and given that fma and av/t, I have rearranged the formula to fm*(v/t). F0.001*(7513595.439/60). Simplify to F0.001*(125226.5906). Then multiply to F125.23 Newtons. That's 125.23 Newtons for every gram of plasma that hits the other ship. In reality more like a kilogram would be fired at the enemy ships. 125.23 newtons is enough to deform steel. So multiply that by a thousand (or just don't multiply by a thousandth) and the amount of newtons is 125226.591. Per second. I think it's safe to say that the humans would be annihilated by this.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/26
and accelerate the stream at nearly 40% the speed of light. What. That's absurd. That would tear throuh any shields, any armor like tissue paper. Okay here is the physics. The speed of light is roughly 299792458 meters per second. This value is however in atmosphere on Earth and not vacuum. I will assume that "nearly 40%" means 39.9%. This is 7513595.439 m/s. I will also assume the mass of the plasma is one gram. In reality the mass is much greater then this but I don't know what material they are turning into plasma, or the amount of space in which it is formed. I just really needed to pick an arbitrary number for that.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/26
Stupid turians are stupid. Of the data was encrypted, then why didn't they simply remove all of it onto a seperate computer? If they couldn't do that, when they had the encryptions that allowed them to get half the data then why did they not copy it as it was being unencrypted? There is no way hat they would be this stupid. The only way this could happen is if they had one or a group of turians that sat around and personally read the information. Otherwise I have no idea how this would happen.
| GimmeMore chapter 12 . 12/26/2014
More history,more back story, more context, more big picture. I'm loving this universe you've created, I world like to know more about it, even if it doesn't further the plot.
| FlackAttack chapter 12 . 11/17/2014
Any chance of getting another update for Christmas? Please.
| Ecomadness chapter 12 . 10/30/2014
Loving this chap can't wait for more.
| Salarian Science chapter 7 . 10/23/2014
I'm eager to hear more of the council races opinions on the war. Also, how much of human culture has reached citadel space. I'm thinking that music, literature, etc could have been transferred via the Quarians or Batarians, maybe even the Turians, I imagine they must be trying to "know their enemy" by gathering and studying anything they can get their hands on. Is any human music popular on the citadel or among any council races?
Finally,what are the Salarians doing? They must be doing more. Trying to figure out how to change things in some way favourable to them. They at least will be trying to understand humans as much as possible in an attempt to deal with them in some way should they win the war.
Other than the paucity of updates, this is an excellent read, easily in my top five.
| mr.aanonymous chapter 12 . 9/19/2014
| Spearshaker chapter 12 . 8/1/2014
Can you give us a chance to hear an aliens opinion on Shakespeare. I would really get a kick out or hearing their response to Hamlet, Julius Caesar, Macbeth, Henry V, Richard III or any others you can think of. I always enjoy getting an outsiders opinion on something foreign to them.
| FlackAttack chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
I just noticed the Shakespeare reference in this chapter. Can't help but wonder what it means for the story.
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 12 . 6/30/2014
Minus the repulsing pairing on your synopsis...
This was brilliant, fabulous - nay! - marvelous even!
But in the future I do vehemently hope that the Turian scum does not mate with a human...
For me that's basically bestiality -.-
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 11 . 6/30/2014
Mhm I skipped over all parts with Shepherd...
Yet I still find myself up to date without losing any information...
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Yes, turned around, as long as its not through the eyes of a Garrus or Shepherd I'm a happy bloke.
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
What the fuck this is disappointing, I was hoping for humanity to make sure the bastards went extinct, not to fucking mate with them!