Reviews for Mistakes
Dani chapter 8 . 8/12/2014
Loved, loved, loved this fic! PERFECT all the way through!
ScarletCougar chapter 8 . 10/11/2012
There were moments where I was not sure if I would like this. Glad I read it through and i love how you ended it. I'm going to go play Act 2 now of the game. I should not be reading fic that contain bits and bawb of stuff I have yet to get to.
ScarletCougar chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
Oh Fenris... your mistake is... so huge I don't have words for it.
ScarletCougar chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Bwahahahaha! I am so entertained already!
BlackStormShadow chapter 8 . 2/28/2012
I am officially in love with your Fenders ... thankyouthankyouthankyou for a happy ending ...

And I believe I was able to mend my breaking heart by the end ... especially with Merrill's comment on Strip Diamondback
BlackStormShadow chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
Auntie Isabella? And Anders has a monster ... and I vote for the third option too!

My heart ... and my feels! ... I can't ... I don't think I can go on with all these conflicting feels!
BlackStormShadow chapter 5 . 2/28/2012
My heart! ... you brokded it so many times I thought I would never be able to feel anything again ... then you picked up all the broken shards and put it back together again, piece by shattered piece, crack by faulted crack ...

I love you so much right now!
BlackStormShadow chapter 4 . 2/28/2012
So ... Fenris' heart is shattering? ... You didn't need to crush mine in the process!
BlackStormShadow chapter 3 . 2/28/2012
I think this is the third time in the last 12 hours maybe ... that I've had to say this ...

Yeah! It's not like I need my heart or anything!
BlackStormShadow chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
All my feels from the last hour just jumped out the window, danced in the rain, and ran back inside of me all at one with the fear of getting pneumonia ...

I'm liking thus far!
Smilez and chocolate milk chapter 8 . 2/19/2012
I like this. Very amusing. Very amusing indeed. I think this was well written.
The Almighty Goblin chapter 8 . 2/18/2012
I loved it! Fluffy but not overdone. I would love to read anything else you come up with for this story and it's characters. Perhaps something funny about Varric's friend-fiction. And it you like to go into the NSFW stuff, than that too. No pressure lol

BTW, when Anders first confronts Fenris he says stuff like "that's what friends do" but later on he responds to Fenris' friend comment with "just friends?" Considering the whole story started with Anders' attachment, I like his split second of disappointment but the earlier part should have a little clarification of why he uses the word "friend" maybe have him think about it...or you could just change it completely...or keep it as it is lol It's your story!
Pintsizedpsycho chapter 8 . 2/17/2012
Great story! Thanks for sharing! :)
Pintsizedpsycho chapter 7 . 2/16/2012
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)
gatorsnacks chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
._. Fenris I just want to give you a hug with my hands around your throat :)
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