|Reviews for Undeserving of Your Love|
| Sietha chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Really great idea. I think you could expand it a little, though.
Also, there were a few mistakes in punctuation, but other than that, I really liked it. The last lines were really powerful, and you captured William's character perfectly-respectful, but so kind and good-hearted.
| Brette O'Connell chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
This was truly lovely. Thank you!